笑聊 探花
Joined: 05 Jan 2010 Posts: 3448 Location: 中国江苏无锡 笑聊Collection |
Posted: 2010-11-12 11:38:48 Post subject: 七律-静思 |
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文/笑聊
秋山远黛淡烟笼,出岫轻云带劲风。
落日存心怀暖阙,晚霞随意点苍穹。
艳枫飒爽迎诗客,流水回环灌劲松。
看得人间多少事,闲心莫若鹤飞同。
注:住院期间静思偶得。 |
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白云闲人 探花
Joined: 26 Aug 2007 Posts: 3466
白云闲人Collection |
Posted: 2010-11-12 16:29:35 Post subject: |
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笑聊,住院医疗后,感觉如何! 最重要的是:自己对自己要有信心,要抱乐覌开怀之心态,则身体便会迅速康复!
請保持:"艳楓飒爽迎诗客"的乐覌心境! _________________ 诗中岁月,
笛里关山. |
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黄洋界 探花
Joined: 23 Mar 2007 Posts: 3301 Location: 多伦多,加拿大 黄洋界Collection |
Posted: 2010-11-12 17:55:44 Post subject: |
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"看得人间多少事,闲心莫若鹤飞同“
笑聊兄毕竟是豁达之人,现在康复得怎样?问好!
第六句的”贯“字是否应为”灌“? _________________ ++++++++++++++
喜金石书画,友竹菊梅兰 |
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笑聊 探花
Joined: 05 Jan 2010 Posts: 3448 Location: 中国江苏无锡 笑聊Collection |
Posted: 2010-11-12 18:36:49 Post subject: |
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白云闲人 wrote: |
笑聊,住院医疗后,感觉如何! 最重要的是:自己对自己要有信心,要抱乐覌开怀之心态,则身体便会迅速康复!
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到目前为止,术前检查才结束。下周一上午手术。
谢谢老师宽慰! |
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笑聊 探花
Joined: 05 Jan 2010 Posts: 3448 Location: 中国江苏无锡 笑聊Collection |
Posted: 2010-11-12 18:44:39 Post subject: |
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黄洋界 wrote: |
"看得人间多少事,闲心莫若鹤飞同“
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谢谢黄老师关怀!贯实为灌。谢谢。 |
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qinghongh 榜眼
Joined: 14 Oct 2007 Posts: 4110
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Posted: 2010-11-12 20:51:25 Post subject: |
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笑聊兄多保重!祝笑聊兄手术顺利早日康复! |
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笑聊 探花
Joined: 05 Jan 2010 Posts: 3448 Location: 中国江苏无锡 笑聊Collection |
Posted: 2010-11-12 23:37:02 Post subject: |
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qinghongh wrote: |
笑聊兄多保重!祝笑聊兄手术顺利早日康复! |
谢谢庆宏兄关怀!谢谢师友们的关心! |
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影沉寒水 举人
Joined: 16 Feb 2010 Posts: 1145 Location: 中国福建 影沉寒水Collection |
Posted: 2010-11-13 03:41:45 Post subject: |
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秋山远黛罩群峰
前有秋山后有群峰不合理 _________________ 诗无涯。思在线 |
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笑聊 探花
Joined: 05 Jan 2010 Posts: 3448 Location: 中国江苏无锡 笑聊Collection |
Posted: 2010-11-13 03:47:54 Post subject: |
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影沉寒水 wrote: |
秋山远黛罩群峰
前有秋山后有群峰不合理 |
讲得有道理。容我斟酌。
秋山远黛淡烟笼,出岫轻云带劲风。
这样行么? |
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白云闲人 探花
Joined: 26 Aug 2007 Posts: 3466
白云闲人Collection |
Posted: 2010-11-13 08:42:25 Post subject: |
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祝笑聊手术順利,身体迅速康复! 以更精彩的词筆,和朋友們舒怀唱和! _________________ 诗中岁月,
笛里关山. |
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笑聊 探花
Joined: 05 Jan 2010 Posts: 3448 Location: 中国江苏无锡 笑聊Collection |
Posted: 2010-11-13 23:55:24 Post subject: |
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谢谢老师关怀!
等手术后,和师友们唱和:用彩云做笺,采甘露研墨,抒豪情以为山河点缀;续婉约尝试百花竞放。歌红枫而唱北美;赋四季而赢灿烂。、、、 、、、
谢谢师友们的关怀!约十五天左右不能上网,我会想念师友们! |
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胡恢宗 秀才
Joined: 15 Mar 2008 Posts: 564
胡恢宗Collection |
Posted: 2010-11-14 00:43:19 Post subject: |
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祝笑聊老师手术顺利,早日恢复健康。 _________________ 水曲云烟绕 林深鸟竞飞 |
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冰清 同进士出身
Joined: 29 Mar 2007 Posts: 1921
冰清Collection |
Posted: 2010-11-18 11:40:23 Post subject: |
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笑聊 wrote: |
谢谢老师关怀!
等手术后,和师友们唱和:用彩云做笺,采甘露研墨,抒豪情以为山河点缀;续婉约尝试百花竞放。歌红枫而唱北美;赋四季而赢灿烂。、、、 、、、
谢谢师友们的关怀!约十五天左右不能上网,我会想念师友们!
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刚看到,愣神儿。
祷祝声声:盼早日康复! |
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柳无歌者无聊 童生
Joined: 20 Nov 2010 Posts: 4
柳无歌者无聊Collection |
Posted: 2010-11-20 07:47:25 Post subject: |
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来问候笑聊老师 祝早日康复 |
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柳无歌者无聊 童生
Joined: 20 Nov 2010 Posts: 4
柳无歌者无聊Collection |
Posted: 2010-11-20 07:47:47 Post subject: |
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来问候笑聊老师 祝早日康复 |
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白水 大学士
Joined: 02 Oct 2006 Posts: 14102 Location: TORONTO 白水Collection |
Posted: 2010-11-20 14:47:58 Post subject: |
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问好笑聊, 盼你早日康复。 |
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秋叶 秀才
Joined: 17 Feb 2007 Posts: 769
秋叶Collection |
Posted: 2010-11-20 22:43:34 Post subject: |
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看得人间多少事,闲心莫若鹤飞同。
同感也, 笑聊兄保重。 |
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吟风道人 童生
Joined: 24 Nov 2010 Posts: 13
吟风道人Collection |
Posted: 2010-11-24 17:11:54 Post subject: |
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蕴藉闲逸,劲赏! _________________ 懒道人莲池醉月,癫居士竹径吟风。 |
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笑聊 探花
Joined: 05 Jan 2010 Posts: 3448 Location: 中国江苏无锡 笑聊Collection |
Posted: 2010-11-27 02:35:47 Post subject: |
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胡恢宗 wrote: |
祝笑聊老师手术顺利,早日恢复健康。 |
谢谢胡兄关怀!问好!
你我兄弟相称,老师断不敢当。 |
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笑聊 探花
Joined: 05 Jan 2010 Posts: 3448 Location: 中国江苏无锡 笑聊Collection |
Posted: 2010-11-27 02:37:42 Post subject: |
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冰清 wrote: |
笑聊 wrote: |
谢谢老师关怀!
等手术后,和师友们唱和:用彩云做笺,采甘露研墨,抒豪情以为山河点缀;续婉约尝试百花竞放。歌红枫而唱北美;赋四季而赢灿烂。、、、 、、、
谢谢师友们的关怀!约十五天左右不能上网,我会想念师友们!
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刚看到,愣神儿。
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谢谢冰清老师关怀,问好! |
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