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笑聊
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PostPosted: 2010-11-12 11:38:48    Post subject: 七律-静思 Reply with quote

文/笑聊

秋山远黛淡烟笼,出岫轻云带劲风。

落日存心怀暖阙,晚霞随意点苍穹。

艳枫飒爽迎诗客,流水回环灌劲松。

看得人间多少事,闲心莫若鹤飞同。



注:住院期间静思偶得。
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白云闲人
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PostPosted: 2010-11-12 16:29:35    Post subject: Reply with quote

笑聊,住院医疗后,感觉如何! 最重要的是:自己对自己要有信心,要抱乐覌开怀之心态,则身体便会迅速康复!
請保持:"艳楓飒爽迎诗客"的乐覌心境!
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黄洋界
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PostPosted: 2010-11-12 17:55:44    Post subject: Reply with quote

"看得人间多少事,闲心莫若鹤飞同“
笑聊兄毕竟是豁达之人,现在康复得怎样?问好!
第六句的”贯“字是否应为”灌“?
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笑聊
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PostPosted: 2010-11-12 18:36:49    Post subject: Reply with quote

白云闲人 wrote:
笑聊,住院医疗后,感觉如何! 最重要的是:自己对自己要有信心,要抱乐覌开怀之心态,则身体便会迅速康复!
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到目前为止,术前检查才结束。下周一上午手术。

谢谢老师宽慰!
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PostPosted: 2010-11-12 18:44:39    Post subject: Reply with quote

黄洋界 wrote:
"看得人间多少事,闲心莫若鹤飞同“
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谢谢黄老师关怀!贯实为灌。谢谢。
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PostPosted: 2010-11-12 20:51:25    Post subject: Reply with quote

笑聊兄多保重!祝笑聊兄手术顺利早日康复!
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PostPosted: 2010-11-12 23:37:02    Post subject: Reply with quote

qinghongh wrote:
笑聊兄多保重!祝笑聊兄手术顺利早日康复!


谢谢庆宏兄关怀!谢谢师友们的关心!
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PostPosted: 2010-11-13 03:41:45    Post subject: Reply with quote

秋山远黛罩群峰

前有秋山后有群峰不合理
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PostPosted: 2010-11-13 03:47:54    Post subject: Reply with quote

影沉寒水 wrote:
秋山远黛罩群峰

前有秋山后有群峰不合理


讲得有道理。容我斟酌。

秋山远黛淡烟笼,出岫轻云带劲风。

这样行么?
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PostPosted: 2010-11-13 08:42:25    Post subject: Reply with quote

祝笑聊手术順利,身体迅速康复! 以更精彩的词筆,和朋友們舒怀唱和!
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PostPosted: 2010-11-13 23:55:24    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢老师关怀!

等手术后,和师友们唱和:用彩云做笺,采甘露研墨,抒豪情以为山河点缀;续婉约尝试百花竞放。歌红枫而唱北美;赋四季而赢灿烂。、、、 、、、

谢谢师友们的关怀!约十五天左右不能上网,我会想念师友们!
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PostPosted: 2010-11-14 00:43:19    Post subject: Reply with quote

祝笑聊老师手术顺利,早日恢复健康。
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PostPosted: 2010-11-18 11:40:23    Post subject: Reply with quote

笑聊 wrote:
谢谢老师关怀!
等手术后,和师友们唱和:用彩云做笺,采甘露研墨,抒豪情以为山河点缀;续婉约尝试百花竞放。歌红枫而唱北美;赋四季而赢灿烂。、、、 、、、

谢谢师友们的关怀!约十五天左右不能上网,我会想念师友们!
...

刚看到,愣神儿。

祷祝声声:盼早日康复!
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PostPosted: 2010-11-20 07:47:25    Post subject: Reply with quote

来问候笑聊老师 祝早日康复
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PostPosted: 2010-11-20 07:47:47    Post subject: Reply with quote

来问候笑聊老师 祝早日康复
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PostPosted: 2010-11-20 14:47:58    Post subject: Reply with quote

问好笑聊, 盼你早日康复。
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PostPosted: 2010-11-20 22:43:34    Post subject: Reply with quote

看得人间多少事,闲心莫若鹤飞同。

同感也, 笑聊兄保重。
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PostPosted: 2010-11-24 17:11:54    Post subject: Reply with quote

蕴藉闲逸,劲赏!
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懒道人莲池醉月,癫居士竹径吟风。
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笑聊
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PostPosted: 2010-11-27 02:35:47    Post subject: Reply with quote

胡恢宗 wrote:
祝笑聊老师手术顺利,早日恢复健康。


谢谢胡兄关怀!问好!

你我兄弟相称,老师断不敢当。
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PostPosted: 2010-11-27 02:37:42    Post subject: Reply with quote

冰清 wrote:
笑聊 wrote:
谢谢老师关怀!
等手术后,和师友们唱和:用彩云做笺,采甘露研墨,抒豪情以为山河点缀;续婉约尝试百花竞放。歌红枫而唱北美;赋四季而赢灿烂。、、、 、、、

谢谢师友们的关怀!约十五天左右不能上网,我会想念师友们!
...

刚看到,愣神儿。
...


谢谢冰清老师关怀,问好!
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