William Zhou周道模
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 Posted: 2010-11-10 23:09:44 Post subject: 【汉英微型诗】日光浴 |
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日光浴
阳光在我身上扎针
扎痛骨头
寻找牺牲了的前辈
Sun Bathing
Sunlight is giving an acupuncture treatment to my body
pricking my bones
seeking the sacrificed antecessors
2010-11-3 12:02 阳光中
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Lake
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| Posted: 2010-11-11 06:10:31 Post subject: |
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Hi William,
不太懂这句
“寻找牺牲了的前辈 ”
在整首诗中的意思。
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William Zhou周道模
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| Posted: 2010-11-12 20:28:47 Post subject: |
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谢谢Lake 君的读问！第三句有意含蓄，可供读者想象读解，这样有“再创作”的乐趣。但是也有弊端，就是可能晦涩。
我现在能解释的有三种：1、阳光的前辈 2、我的前辈 3、其它比如人类的前辈
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