冰清 同进士出身
Joined: 29 Mar 2007 Posts: 1921
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Posted: 2007-03-29 04:03:48 Post subject: 款款风容 |
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老树催生叶叶新,
晨光满眼净纤尘。
曾经山海谁为似?
款款风容烟柳林。 |
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和平岛 举人

Joined: 25 May 2006 Posts: 1277 Location: Victoria, Canada 和平岛Collection |
Posted: 2007-03-29 07:19:01 Post subject: |
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欢迎 冰清姐!
雍容大度的诗词,给人以积极向上的力量
 _________________ 写诗是为了写更好的诗 |
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白水 大学士

Joined: 02 Oct 2006 Posts: 14102 Location: TORONTO 白水Collection |
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kokho 进士出身

Joined: 30 Nov 2006 Posts: 2642 Location: Singapore kokhoCollection |
Posted: 2007-03-29 10:57:58 Post subject: |
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拜读 问好 。。。
 _________________ 乒乓、摄影、诗歌 |
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秋叶 秀才
Joined: 17 Feb 2007 Posts: 769
秋叶Collection |
Posted: 2007-03-29 22:13:39 Post subject: Re: 款款风容 |
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冰清 wrote: |
老树催生叶叶新,
晨光满眼净纤尘。
曾经山海谁为似?
款款风容烟柳林。 |
冰清老师,好诗也,临屏次韵一首,请斧正:
岛上他乡柳色新,
冰清玉洁不沾尘。
音容笑貌曾相似,
原是故知归翰林。 |
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聽雲館主 秀才

Joined: 03 Mar 2007 Posts: 361 Location: Canada 聽雲館主Collection |
Posted: 2007-03-29 23:08:52 Post subject: |
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拜讀大作,欣賞! _________________ 壇前易解拈花意 席上難逢顧曲心 |
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冰清 同进士出身
Joined: 29 Mar 2007 Posts: 1921
冰清Collection |
Posted: 2007-03-30 10:16:41 Post subject: Re: 款款风容 |
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秋叶 wrote: |
冰清 wrote: |
老树催生叶叶新,
晨光满眼净纤尘。
曾经山海谁为似?
款款风容烟柳林。 |
冰清老师,好诗也,临屏次韵一首,请斧正:
岛上他乡柳色新,
冰清玉洁不沾尘。
音容笑貌曾相似,
原是故知归翰林。 |
谢谢kokho和四位斑斑。
有感,再和!
风怀海岳向天门,
揚采行文盼玉玢。
好是寻师翰林院
借来春色自消魂。
请别称我老师,我的确是在向你们学.是十打十的学! |
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莹雪 进士出身
Joined: 28 Sep 2006 Posts: 2520 Location: 中国-辽宁·三燕故都 莹雪Collection |
Posted: 2007-03-31 00:24:29 Post subject: |
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欢迎冰清老师!  |
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荷梦 进士出身
Joined: 19 Dec 2006 Posts: 2826 Location: 湖北,黄梅 荷梦Collection |
Posted: 2007-03-31 16:59:23 Post subject: |
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好诗,学习了! |
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