冰清
同进士出身
Joined: 29 Mar 2007
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 Posted: 2007-03-29 04:03:48 Post subject: 款款风容 |
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老树催生叶叶新，
晨光满眼净纤尘。
曾经山海谁为似？
款款风容烟柳林。 |
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和平岛
举人
Joined: 25 May 2006
Posts: 1277
Location: Victoria, Canada
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| Posted: 2007-03-29 07:19:01 Post subject: |
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欢迎 冰清姐！
雍容大度的诗词，给人以积极向上的力量
 
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白水
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Posts: 14102
Location: TORONTO
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kokho
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Joined: 30 Nov 2006
Posts: 2642
Location: Singapore
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| Posted: 2007-03-29 10:57:58 Post subject: |
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拜读 问好 。。。
 
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秋叶
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Joined: 17 Feb 2007
Posts: 769
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| Posted: 2007-03-29 22:13:39 Post subject: Re: 款款风容 |
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老树催生叶叶新，
晨光满眼净纤尘。
曾经山海谁为似？
款款风容烟柳林。 |
冰清老师，好诗也，临屏次韵一首，请斧正：
岛上他乡柳色新，
冰清玉洁不沾尘。
音容笑貌曾相似，
原是故知归翰林。 |
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聽雲館主
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Joined: 03 Mar 2007
Posts: 361
Location: Canada
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| Posted: 2007-03-29 23:08:52 Post subject: |
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拜讀大作，欣賞！
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冰清
同进士出身
Joined: 29 Mar 2007
Posts: 1921
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| Posted: 2007-03-30 10:16:41 Post subject: Re: 款款风容 |
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| 秋叶 wrote: |
| 冰清 wrote: |
老树催生叶叶新，
晨光满眼净纤尘。
曾经山海谁为似？
款款风容烟柳林。 |
冰清老师，好诗也，临屏次韵一首，请斧正：
岛上他乡柳色新，
冰清玉洁不沾尘。
音容笑貌曾相似，
原是故知归翰林。 |
谢谢kokho和四位斑斑。
有感,再和！
风怀海岳向天门，
揚采行文盼玉玢。
好是寻师翰林院
借来春色自消魂。
请别称我老师,我的确是在向你们学.是十打十的学！ |
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莹雪
进士出身
Joined: 28 Sep 2006
Posts: 2520
Location: 中国－辽宁·三燕故都
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| Posted: 2007-03-31 00:24:29 Post subject: |
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欢迎冰清老师！  |
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荷梦
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Joined: 19 Dec 2006
Posts: 2826
Location: 湖北，黄梅
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| Posted: 2007-03-31 16:59:23 Post subject: |
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