Maple Review Home
   Chinese Literature Society of North America | Maple Review | Immigrants in Canada | Angel Studio | The Driftwood Artist Society | Ocean of Poetry | Island of Music
"HuaHe Cup" 2007 Chinese Mainland and Oversea Poetry Competition and Non-governmental Magazines and Newspapers Joint Exhibition starts on the first day of 2007.
  
 FAQFAQ   SearchSearch   MemberlistMemberlist   UsergroupsUsergroups   RegisterRegister  ProfileProfile    Log in to check your private messagesLog in to check your private messages   Sign inSign in   BlogsBlogs    Weblogs NewsWeblogs News   AlbumAlbum 
English Home Bilingual Home Chinese Home
Dictionary Check Poems' Rules & Forms Search for Chinese Poems Poetry & Music

Maple Review Home -> 古韵新音 Post new topic   Reply to topic
款款风容
冰清
同进士出身


Joined: 29 Mar 2007
Posts: 1921

冰清Collection
PostPosted: 2007-03-29 04:03:48    Post subject: 款款风容 Reply with quote

老树催生叶叶新,
晨光满眼净纤尘。
曾经山海谁为似?
款款风容烟柳林。
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message
和平岛
举人


Joined: 25 May 2006
Posts: 1277
Location: Victoria, Canada
和平岛Collection
PostPosted: 2007-03-29 07:19:01    Post subject: Reply with quote

欢迎 冰清姐!
Very Happy

雍容大度的诗词,给人以积极向上的力量
cheers smiling rose
_________________
写诗是为了写更好的诗
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message Blog Visit poster's website
白水
大学士


Joined: 02 Oct 2006
Posts: 14102
Location: TORONTO
白水Collection
PostPosted: 2007-03-29 09:39:40    Post subject: Reply with quote

冰清老师, 欢迎 love you
请点这个:

http://oson.ca/viewtopic.php?p=15396#15396
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message Blog
kokho
进士出身


Joined: 30 Nov 2006
Posts: 2642
Location: Singapore
kokhoCollection
PostPosted: 2007-03-29 10:57:58    Post subject: Reply with quote

拜读 问好 。。。

Cool Laughing
_________________
乒乓、摄影、诗歌
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message Blog
秋叶
秀才


Joined: 17 Feb 2007
Posts: 769

秋叶Collection
PostPosted: 2007-03-29 22:13:39    Post subject: Re: 款款风容 Reply with quote

冰清 wrote:
老树催生叶叶新,
晨光满眼净纤尘。
曾经山海谁为似?
款款风容烟柳林。



冰清老师,好诗也,临屏次韵一首,请斧正:

岛上他乡柳色新,
冰清玉洁不沾尘。
音容笑貌曾相似,
原是故知归翰林。
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message
聽雲館主
秀才


Joined: 03 Mar 2007
Posts: 361
Location: Canada
聽雲館主Collection
PostPosted: 2007-03-29 23:08:52    Post subject: Reply with quote

拜讀大作,欣賞!
_________________
壇前易解拈花意 席上難逢顧曲心
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message Visit poster's website
冰清
同进士出身


Joined: 29 Mar 2007
Posts: 1921

冰清Collection
PostPosted: 2007-03-30 10:16:41    Post subject: Re: 款款风容 Reply with quote

秋叶 wrote:
冰清 wrote:
老树催生叶叶新,
晨光满眼净纤尘。
曾经山海谁为似?
款款风容烟柳林。



冰清老师,好诗也,临屏次韵一首,请斧正:

岛上他乡柳色新,
冰清玉洁不沾尘。
音容笑貌曾相似,
原是故知归翰林。


谢谢kokho和四位斑斑。
有感,再和!

风怀海岳向天门,
揚采行文盼玉玢。
好是寻师翰林院
借来春色自消魂。

请别称我老师,我的确是在向你们学.是十打十的学!
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message
莹雪
进士出身


Joined: 28 Sep 2006
Posts: 2520
Location: 中国-辽宁·三燕故都
莹雪Collection
PostPosted: 2007-03-31 00:24:29    Post subject: Reply with quote

欢迎冰清老师! thanks
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message Blog
荷梦
进士出身


Joined: 19 Dec 2006
Posts: 2826
Location: 湖北,黄梅
荷梦Collection
PostPosted: 2007-03-31 16:59:23    Post subject: Reply with quote

好诗,学习了!
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message
Display posts from previous:   
Emoticons
Very Happy Smile Sad Surprised
Shocked Confused Cool Laughing
Mad Razz Embarassed Crying or Very sad
Evil or Very Mad Twisted Evil Rolling Eyes Wink
Exclamation Question Idea Arrow
View more Emoticons
Page 1 of 1           View previous topic View next topic    
Maple Review Home -> 古韵新音    Post new topic   Reply to topic
Jump to:  


Once you post your works here, that means you submits them to the magazine of Maple Review (North American Maple, or BeiMeiFeng), a bilingual journal published by Chinese Literature Society of North America. The magazine holds the right to translate them into Chinese, and publish them in both languages. You need to be responsible for the copyright issues of your own files uploaded.
Powered by phpBB © 2001, 2005 phpBB Group
phpBB Chinese interface was translated by iCy-fLaME