kokho 进士出身

Joined: 30 Nov 2006 Posts: 2642 Location: Singapore kokhoCollection |
Posted: 2007-03-29 09:01:56 Post subject: 猴禅 |
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猴禅
. kokho
黄山雾顶寒
有猴似老耽
甘睡晌午懒
导游流冷汗
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白水 大学士

Joined: 02 Oct 2006 Posts: 14102 Location: TORONTO 白水Collection |
Posted: 2007-03-29 10:09:48 Post subject: Re: 猴禅 |
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kokho wrote: |
猴禅
. kokho
黄山雾顶寒
有猴似老耽
甘睡晌午懒
导游流冷汗
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有猴似老耽
不太懂耶, 虎视眈眈?  |
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kokho 进士出身

Joined: 30 Nov 2006 Posts: 2642 Location: Singapore kokhoCollection |
Posted: 2007-03-29 10:23:00 Post subject: |
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老耽 = 老子 :))
所以 诗题如是。。。
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白水 大学士

Joined: 02 Oct 2006 Posts: 14102 Location: TORONTO 白水Collection |
Posted: 2007-03-29 10:25:42 Post subject: |
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kokho wrote: |
老耽 = 老子 :))
所以 诗题如是。。。
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你也太省了, 改七言诗不就好写明白了 我走了...... |
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kokho 进士出身

Joined: 30 Nov 2006 Posts: 2642 Location: Singapore kokhoCollection |
Posted: 2007-03-29 22:43:32 Post subject: |
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白水 留下来看看老猴子几时醒
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荷梦 进士出身
Joined: 19 Dec 2006 Posts: 2826 Location: 湖北,黄梅 荷梦Collection |
Posted: 2007-03-31 16:57:35 Post subject: |
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“导游流冷汗”呵呵,有趣。不过,还希望能提示一下,禅? |
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