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猴禅
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PostPosted: 2007-03-29 09:01:56    Post subject: 猴禅 Reply with quote

猴禅
.    kokho

黄山雾顶寒
有猴似老耽
甘睡晌午懒
导游流冷汗






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PostPosted: 2007-03-29 10:09:48    Post subject: Re: 猴禅 Reply with quote

kokho wrote:
猴禅
.    kokho

黄山雾顶寒
有猴似老耽
甘睡晌午懒
导游流冷汗







有猴似老耽 Confused

不太懂耶, 虎视眈眈? Embarassed
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PostPosted: 2007-03-29 10:23:00    Post subject: Reply with quote

老耽 = 老子 :))

所以 诗题如是。。。

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PostPosted: 2007-03-29 10:25:42    Post subject: Reply with quote

kokho wrote:
老耽 = 老子 :))

所以 诗题如是。。。

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你也太省了, 改七言诗不就好写明白了 Razz 我走了......
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PostPosted: 2007-03-29 22:43:32    Post subject: Reply with quote

白水 留下来看看老猴子几时醒  Laughing Laughing


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PostPosted: 2007-03-31 16:57:35    Post subject: Reply with quote

“导游流冷汗”呵呵,有趣。不过,还希望能提示一下,禅?
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