| kokho 进士出身
 
  
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				|  Posted: 2007-03-29 09:01:56    Post subject: 猴禅 |   |  
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				| 猴禅 .    kokho
 
 黄山雾顶寒
 有猴似老耽
 甘睡晌午懒
 导游流冷汗
 
 
 
 
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		| 白水 大学士
 
  
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				|  Posted: 2007-03-29 10:09:48    Post subject: Re: 猴禅 |   |  
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	  | kokho wrote: |  
	  | 猴禅 .    kokho
 
 黄山雾顶寒
 有猴似老耽
 甘睡晌午懒
 导游流冷汗
 
 
 
 
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 有猴似老耽
   
 不太懂耶, 虎视眈眈?
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		| kokho 进士出身
 
  
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				|  Posted: 2007-03-29 10:23:00    Post subject: |   |  
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				| 老耽 = 老子 :)) 
 所以 诗题如是。。。
 
 
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		| 白水 大学士
 
  
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				|  Posted: 2007-03-29 10:25:42    Post subject: |   |  
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	  | kokho wrote: |  
	  | 老耽 = 老子 :)) 
 所以 诗题如是。。。
 
 
    |  你也太省了, 改七言诗不就好写明白了
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		| kokho 进士出身
 
  
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				|  Posted: 2007-03-29 22:43:32    Post subject: |   |  
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				| 白水 留下来看看老猴子几时醒     
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		| 荷梦 进士出身
 
 
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				|  Posted: 2007-03-31 16:57:35    Post subject: |   |  
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				| “导游流冷汗”呵呵,有趣。不过,还希望能提示一下,禅? |  | 
	
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