| 影沉寒水 举人
 
  
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				|  Posted: 2010-07-28 03:28:55    Post subject: 七律•初夏遥情步韵蓬莱仙客 |   |  
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				| 七律•初夏遥情步韵蓬莱仙客 匆雷阵雨夏融春,舟末横空烧火云。
 堤岸行来园上草,蜻蜓飞过水中珍。
 粉红出落新荷美,青翠低摇故柳颦。
 折别衣冠同往事,南枝辗转寄乾坤。
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		| 笑聊 探花
 
 
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				|  Posted: 2010-07-29 04:29:37    Post subject: |   |  
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				| 意境清晰,描绘灵动,对仗新奇。 
 欣赏学习!
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		| 白水 大学士
 
  
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				|  Posted: 2010-07-29 12:22:07    Post subject: |   |  
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		| 影沉寒水 举人
 
  
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				|  Posted: 2010-07-30 02:19:59    Post subject: |   |  
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				| 问好两位斑斑 _________________
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