影沉寒水 举人

Joined: 16 Feb 2010 Posts: 1145 Location: 中国福建 影沉寒水Collection |
Posted: 2010-07-28 03:28:55 Post subject: 七律•初夏遥情步韵蓬莱仙客 |
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七律•初夏遥情步韵蓬莱仙客
匆雷阵雨夏融春,舟末横空烧火云。
堤岸行来园上草,蜻蜓飞过水中珍。
粉红出落新荷美,青翠低摇故柳颦。
折别衣冠同往事,南枝辗转寄乾坤。 _________________ 诗无涯。思在线 |
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笑聊 探花
Joined: 05 Jan 2010 Posts: 3448 Location: 中国江苏无锡 笑聊Collection |
Posted: 2010-07-29 04:29:37 Post subject: |
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意境清晰,描绘灵动,对仗新奇。
欣赏学习! |
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白水 大学士

Joined: 02 Oct 2006 Posts: 14102 Location: TORONTO 白水Collection |
Posted: 2010-07-29 12:22:07 Post subject: |
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情景相融 |
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影沉寒水 举人

Joined: 16 Feb 2010 Posts: 1145 Location: 中国福建 影沉寒水Collection |
Posted: 2010-07-30 02:19:59 Post subject: |
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问好两位斑斑 _________________ 诗无涯。思在线 |
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