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秘密(情诗一首)
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PostPosted: 2010-07-27 22:21:38    Post subject: 秘密(情诗一首) Reply with quote

秘密


你是我今生的最爱
但不是我今生的唯一

几乎我生命的每一页
都烙着你的印记
只有几页
被我悄悄地藏起

岁月悠悠
我有犹豫的时刻
漫漫长路
我有迷茫的日子

偶尔
在无人的深夜
我会翻阅
那几页尘封的往事

有淡淡的酒香
有多情的小诗
有梦迥的舞曲
还有他轻轻的叹息

这一切都已深深地埋在我的心底
因为我知道
今生今世我始终最爱
——是你


<秘密>写作札记:

我相信大多数人漫长的一生中,总会有一两次感情越轨的时候。



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人是善妒的动物,所以我认为你偷情越轨之事绝对不能告诉你的另一半,最好连过去的情事都要保密, 否则一定坏事,一定自吃其果。轻者,怀恨在心,折磨你一辈子,重者,恩断情绝,分道扬镳。就算万一被另一半知道了,除非被抓奸在床,人赃并获,否则,应坚不吐实,死口不认。因为另一半总是愿意相信爱人的话,他们都不愿相信、也不想相信这种事会发生。
我不是教人不诚实,而是这种“诚实”代价太大,负担不起。除非你想离开另一半,那就请快快添油加醋绘声绘色地向对方大讲特讲。
听说现在时兴“换妻”这玩艺,对此我从来就持怀疑的态度。如果可以“换妻而奸易夫而淫”,我相信他们夫妻的感情也是淡如冰水。自己心爱的人,岂容他人染指。不说是人,动物也不行,动物间的打架撕杀,绝大部份是为异性“争风吃醋”。人类历史上许多悲剧、战争就是因男女关系摆不平而起。
听说李银河也赞同换妻这玩艺,李大姐可能只是“从理论到理论”的泛泛之谈。性这种东西,要实践才知道好坏,“如鱼饮水,冷暖自知”。要想知梨子的味道,就要亲口尝尝。想必李大姐没有这方面的经验,所以她的话姑妄听之,当不得真。
紧守秘密,直至永远,这是偷情者首要的原则。所以,我写了这首〈秘密〉。
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PostPosted: 2010-07-28 01:45:45    Post subject: Reply with quote

你是我今生的最爱
但不是我今生的唯一 Laughing
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PostPosted: 2010-07-30 21:32:58    Post subject: Reply with quote

道理说得还可以,只是诗没有诗的感觉。
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……不,我说的是记忆,记忆一点都不可靠。
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PostPosted: 2010-07-30 23:13:44    Post subject: Reply with quote

德艺双馨的偷情艺术家 Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2010-08-01 07:35:25    Post subject: Reply with quote

这是以善始又善终为基础的感情体验~~~
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