不麻醉

[博弈]

不麻醉


妳我
眼睛
凝接在這
傷疤

U and I/Eyes/Melt and freeze /At the scar

皮膚的
小陵

A mound /Above the skin

底下
葬藏著
多年前
的我的她

In it/Buried and treasured/my Her/in the past tense


她仍熟悉
每一通道
每一密室

Yet still Her/Travels every /Passage and cell

妳抬頭
像個醫生
來盜墓

U turn up/A ghoul pretends/To be a surgeon
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（在不斷的審醜裡終將建立起新的審美）

[Lake]

I'm not sure if I like the slashes in the English lines - the slashes read like a scansion of meters, or lines quoted in a prose , or an instruction of where or when the reader needs to stop. I know there's a reason of using slashes, but you know what I mean.

Cheers
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the trouble with poetry is that it encourages the writing of more poetry -- Billy Collins

[Lake]

Don't know why there's a slash inserted before an apostrophe on the thread. Do others have the same issue? It's annoying.
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the trouble with poetry is that it encourages the writing of more poetry -- Billy Collins

[博弈]

？

＂a slash inserted before an apostrophe on the thread＂

what do you mean?
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（在不斷的審醜裡終將建立起新的審美）

[Lake]

On my computer

"I'm not sure"

reads like

I/'m not sure

Is it just me? All it's, they're, I'm look like it/'s, they/'re, I/'m on the thread.
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the trouble with poetry is that it encourages the writing of more poetry -- Billy Collins

[博弈]

[博弈]

[Lake]