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不麻醉

博弈
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發錶於: 2010-06-16 08:25:05 發錶主題: 不麻醉

不麻醉妳我眼睛凝接在這傷疤 U and I/Eyes/Melt and freeze /At the scar 皮膚的小陵 A mound /Above the skin 底下葬藏著多年前的我的她 In it/Buried and treasured/my Her/in the past tense 她仍熟悉每一通道每一密室 Yet still Her/Travels every /Passage and cell 妳抬頭像個醫生來盜墓 U turn up/A ghoul pretends/To be a surgeon _________________ （在不斷的審醜裡終將建立起新的審美）

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Lake
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發錶於: 2010-06-17 09:52:25 發錶主題:

I'm not sure if I like the slashes in the English lines - the slashes read like a scansion of meters, or lines quoted in a prose , or an instruction of where or when the reader needs to stop. I know there's a reason of using slashes, but you know what I mean. Cheers _________________ the trouble with poetry is that it encourages the writing of more poetry -- Billy Collins

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發錶於: 2010-06-17 09:55:58 發錶主題:

Don't know why there's a slash inserted before an apostrophe on the thread. Do others have the same issue? It's annoying. _________________ the trouble with poetry is that it encourages the writing of more poetry -- Billy Collins

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發錶於: 2010-06-17 10:04:12 發錶主題:

？＂a slash inserted before an apostrophe on the thread＂ what do you mean? _________________ （在不斷的審醜裡終將建立起新的審美）

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Lake
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發錶於: 2010-06-17 10:18:01 發錶主題:

On my computer "I'm not sure" reads like I/'m not sure Is it just me? All it's, they're, I'm look like it/'s, they/'re, I/'m on the thread. _________________ the trouble with poetry is that it encourages the writing of more poetry -- Billy Collins

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發錶於: 2010-06-17 10:23:58 發錶主題:

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I'm not sure if I like the slashes in the English lines - the slashes read like a scansion of meters, or lines quoted in a prose , or an instruction of where or when the reader needs to stop. I know there's a reason of using slashes, but you know what I mean.
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大概是＂凝接＂吧。
也作分行詩的分段功能，排列起來省點空間，一塊一塊的（Ｘ－Ｙ軸）。 Laughing