昕阳一片
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 Posted: 2010-05-04 04:31:12 Post subject: 七律•春 |
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七律•春
昕阳一片
春风一缕自东来,大地生机接续开.
杨柳葳蕤借水映,樱桃妩媚就亭偎.
幽鸣顿起莺声闹,暴拨应凭竹节猜.
始信青君深暖意,沧溟万丈亦心恢.
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笑聊
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| Posted: 2010-05-04 04:55:51 Post subject: |
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杨柳葳蕤借水映,樱桃妩媚恋亭偎
欣赏并问好！ |
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白云闲人
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| Posted: 2010-05-04 06:54:10 Post subject: |
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杨柳葳蕤、樱桃妩媚、莺声闹 --- 構成一幅春图!
請教:在如此旖旎的春图中,却在结句使用"堪哀"?不协全诗情调!
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崔光全
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| Posted: 2010-05-04 15:08:55 Post subject: |
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| 不错，欣赏了 |
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昕阳一片
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| Posted: 2010-05-08 02:36:18 Post subject: |
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| 笑聊 wrote: |
杨柳葳蕤借水映,樱桃妩媚恋亭偎
欣赏并问好！ |
谢谢。问好！ |
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昕阳一片
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| Posted: 2010-05-08 02:37:14 Post subject: |
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| 白云闲人 wrote: |
杨柳葳蕤、樱桃妩媚、莺声闹 --- 構成一幅春图!
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谢谢。略改。问好！ |
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昕阳一片
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| Posted: 2010-05-08 02:37:51 Post subject: |
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谢鼓励。问好！ |
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