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白水
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PostPosted: 2010-03-15 16:59:01    Post subject: Reply with quote

笑聊 wrote:
学习欣赏好诗!


问好笑聊,谢谢你的鼓励
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金金
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PostPosted: 2010-03-15 20:43:23    Post subject: Reply with quote

渗透着人生感情。
更希望能抽走照片单看诗歌也能做到表面意思明了。水是古老的,人,其实不存在包容的真实性质,对于自身,只有变化。
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白水
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PostPosted: 2010-03-15 22:23:51    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢金金的建议,当时因照片而题“画”,随即联想读到的文章而展开。写完后却和你想到了同样的问题,“抽开照片”。懒了一下,没再想。

先换个简单的题目试试 Wink

天鹅

(一)
幻化于蓝
你就是圣洁的爱神之岛

一座写意相识,一座
深藏相知,而这最后一座
掩埋着苦难
那些羁旅的脚印
因了伤痛, 每一步
都刻骨铭心

(二)
深秋之翔,于南岸
早春之落于北城
夏之交,于颈
不过衔起一颗心形的影像
惟有冬日
你零乱的羽毛散落为无根的大雪
灵魂呼喊着灵魂,相濡
于苍白的飞沫

(三)
太阳会醒的
春天也会醒的
那么冰雪?

醒来的冰雪就是一泻千里的河流
潜底?凌空?
那么那些活物?庄子说

相濡以沫,不如
相忘于江湖
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湮雨朦朦
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PostPosted: 2010-03-18 04:43:32    Post subject: Reply with quote

摄影技术还不错,白水同志,再问候.
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白水
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PostPosted: 2010-03-18 16:53:46    Post subject: Reply with quote

湮雨朦朦 wrote:
摄影技术还不错,白水同志,再问候.


My God, 别叫“同志”, 我好像没性取向问题, 虽然有人称我白水兄 Embarassed Wink

anyway, 我会把你的赞扬转告摄影师。Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2010-03-20 21:51:16    Post subject: Reply with quote

这么好的诗图应该放到我的新浪博客中宣传一下! Very Happy
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大侠仙子
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PostPosted: 2010-03-20 22:12:09    Post subject: Reply with quote

美到生疼,写得好!功夫。
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白水
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PostPosted: 2010-03-21 18:00:55    Post subject: Reply with quote

问好ZMJ166,问好大侠仙子谢谢鼓励
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PostPosted: 2010-03-22 09:24:18    Post subject: Reply with quote

再来学习!
Smile Smile
http://blog.sina.com.cn/s/blog_598ffe560100i114.html#comment
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PostPosted: 2010-03-25 17:10:45    Post subject: Reply with quote

zmj166 wrote:
再来学习!
Smile Smile
http://blog.sina.com.cn/s/blog_598ffe560100i114.html#comment


谢谢喜欢 Embarassed
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PostPosted: 2010-03-27 04:55:35    Post subject: Reply with quote

学习欣赏好诗!
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PostPosted: 2010-03-28 09:30:44    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢雨,周末愉快
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