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白水
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Posted: 2010-03-15 16:59:01 Post subject:

笑聊 wrote:

学习欣赏好诗！

问好笑聊，谢谢你的鼓励

金金
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Posted: 2010-03-15 20:43:23 Post subject:

渗透着人生感情。更希望能抽走照片单看诗歌也能做到表面意思明了。水是古老的，人，其实不存在包容的真实性质，对于自身，只有变化。 _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/shirenjinjin

白水
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Posted: 2010-03-15 22:23:51 Post subject:

谢谢金金的建议，当时因照片而题“画”，随即联想读到的文章而展开。写完后却和你想到了同样的问题，“抽开照片”。懒了一下，没再想。先换个简单的题目试试天鹅（一）幻化于蓝你就是圣洁的爱神之岛一座写意相识，一座深藏相知，而这最后一座掩埋着苦难那些羁旅的脚印因了伤痛，每一步都刻骨铭心（二）深秋之翔，于南岸早春之落于北城夏之交，于颈不过衔起一颗心形的影像惟有冬日你零乱的羽毛散落为无根的大雪灵魂呼喊着灵魂，相濡于苍白的飞沫（三）太阳会醒的春天也会醒的那么冰雪？醒来的冰雪就是一泻千里的河流潜底？凌空？那么那些活物？庄子说相濡以沫，不如相忘于江湖

湮雨朦朦
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Posted: 2010-03-18 04:43:32 Post subject:

摄影技术还不错,白水同志,再问候.

白水
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Posted: 2010-03-18 16:53:46 Post subject:

湮雨朦朦 wrote:

摄影技术还不错,白水同志,再问候.

My God, 别叫“同志”，我好像没性取向问题，虽然有人称我白水兄 Embarassed

anyway, 我会把你的赞扬转告摄影师。 Very Happy

zmj166
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Posted: 2010-03-20 21:51:16 Post subject:

这么好的诗图应该放到我的新浪博客中宣传一下！

大侠仙子
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Posted: 2010-03-20 22:12:09 Post subject:

美到生疼，写得好！功夫。

白水
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Posted: 2010-03-21 18:00:55 Post subject:

问好ZMJ166，问好大侠仙子谢谢鼓励

zmj166
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Posted: 2010-03-22 09:24:18 Post subject:

再来学习！ http://blog.sina.com.cn/s/blog_598ffe560100i114.html#comment

白水
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Posted: 2010-03-25 17:10:45 Post subject:

zmj166 wrote:

再来学习！

http://blog.sina.com.cn/s/blog_598ffe560100i114.html#comment

谢谢喜欢

江南雨
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Posted: 2010-03-27 04:55:35 Post subject:

学习欣赏好诗！ _________________ 陕西姜华

白水
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Posted: 2010-03-28 09:30:44 Post subject:

谢谢雨，周末愉快

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