| 江南雨 秀才
 
 
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				|  Posted: 2010-03-04 01:53:50    Post subject: |   |  
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				| 我知道,她也试图逃出冬季 弹一曲清珑珑的古乐
 昨天的大雪
 却给睡眼朦胧的妞妞
 盖上了沉沉的棉被
 优美的小诗,拜读并学习。
 问好老乡,请把我的诗推荐给刊物好吗?谢谢
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		| 白水 大学士
 
  
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				|  Posted: 2010-03-05 21:20:58    Post subject: |   |  
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 问好吴景慧, 希望读到你更多的诗歌
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		| 白水 大学士
 
  
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				|  Posted: 2010-03-05 21:27:45    Post subject: |   |  
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	  | 江南雨 wrote: |  
	  | 我知道,她也试图逃出冬季 弹一曲清珑珑的古乐
 昨天的大雪
 却给睡眼朦胧的妞妞
 盖上了沉沉的棉被
 优美的小诗,拜读并学习。
 问好老乡,请把我的诗推荐给刊物好吗?谢谢
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 问好雨,悄悄告诉你,找主编大人
   
 希望常读到你的诗歌, 周末愉快。
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		| 江南雨 秀才
 
 
 Joined: 03 Jul 2009
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				|  Posted: 2010-03-05 22:32:31    Post subject: |   |  
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				| 主编是那个呀? _________________
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		| 白水 大学士
 
  
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				|  Posted: 2010-03-06 12:48:22    Post subject: |   |  
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				| 就是“为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!”的那位  |  | 
	
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		| 江南雨 秀才
 
 
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				|  Posted: 2010-03-08 04:20:58    Post subject: |   |  
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				| 谢谢指点 _________________
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		| 根瑶 秀才
 
 
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				|  Posted: 2010-03-10 19:08:57    Post subject: |   |  
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				| 力之微弱甚至赶不走一只蚊蝇 巡航导弹的按钮
 毕竟不够温柔
 
 多少个忧心忡忡的夜晚
 你搂着妞妞
 随时准备
 逃离
 
 
 有寓意!问好!
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		| 白水 大学士
 
  
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				|  Posted: 2010-03-10 22:18:16    Post subject: |   |  
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				| 哈,这可是真实的日记,你要知道我写的什么,准和我一样乐   
 希望常读到你的诗歌, 问好
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		| 礼拜九 童生
 
 
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				|  Posted: 2010-03-12 00:35:30    Post subject: |   |  
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				| 呵,嫁个好人家 _________________
 我一旦存在,就不准备消失。
 
 人是他自己和宇宙苍生的命运。
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		| 白水 大学士
 
  
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		| 江南雨 秀才
 
 
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				|  Posted: 2010-03-28 04:53:03    Post subject: |   |  
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				| 优美的小诗,拜读并学习。 _________________
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		| 大侠仙子 秀才
 
  
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				|  Posted: 2010-03-28 05:30:58    Post subject: |   |  
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				| 一同娶来你 婉转的水 和
 流萤的天街
 ——漂亮,问好!
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		| 大侠仙子 秀才
 
  
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				|  Posted: 2010-03-28 05:31:39    Post subject: |   |  
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				| 漂亮,问好! |  | 
	
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		| 白水 大学士
 
  
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				|  Posted: 2010-03-28 08:57:50    Post subject: |   |  
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				| 谢谢雨和大侠, 有你们妞妞会更漂亮  |  | 
	
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