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江南雨
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PostPosted: 2010-03-04 01:53:50    Post subject: Reply with quote

我知道,她也试图逃出冬季
弹一曲清珑珑的古乐
昨天的大雪
却给睡眼朦胧的妞妞
盖上了沉沉的棉被
优美的小诗,拜读并学习。
问好老乡,请把我的诗推荐给刊物好吗?谢谢
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PostPosted: 2010-03-05 21:20:58    Post subject: Reply with quote

吴景慧 wrote:
很优美的小诗,拜读并学习。


问好吴景慧, 希望读到你更多的诗歌
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PostPosted: 2010-03-05 21:27:45    Post subject: Reply with quote

江南雨 wrote:
我知道,她也试图逃出冬季
弹一曲清珑珑的古乐
昨天的大雪
却给睡眼朦胧的妞妞
盖上了沉沉的棉被
优美的小诗,拜读并学习。
问好老乡,请把我的诗推荐给刊物好吗?谢谢
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问好雨,悄悄告诉你,找主编大人 Wink

希望常读到你的诗歌, 周末愉快。
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PostPosted: 2010-03-05 22:32:31    Post subject: Reply with quote

主编是那个呀?
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PostPosted: 2010-03-06 12:48:22    Post subject: Reply with quote

就是“为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!”的那位 Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2010-03-08 04:20:58    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢指点
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PostPosted: 2010-03-10 19:08:57    Post subject: Reply with quote

力之微弱甚至赶不走一只蚊蝇
巡航导弹的按钮
毕竟不够温柔

多少个忧心忡忡的夜晚
你搂着妞妞
随时准备
逃离


有寓意!问好!
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PostPosted: 2010-03-10 22:18:16    Post subject: Reply with quote

哈,这可是真实的日记,你要知道我写的什么,准和我一样乐 Very Happy

希望常读到你的诗歌, 问好
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PostPosted: 2010-03-12 00:35:30    Post subject: Reply with quote

呵,嫁个好人家
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PostPosted: 2010-03-14 08:59:24    Post subject: Reply with quote

礼拜九 wrote:
呵,嫁个好人家


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你不娶吗? Very Happy Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2010-03-28 04:53:03    Post subject: Reply with quote

优美的小诗,拜读并学习。
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PostPosted: 2010-03-28 05:30:58    Post subject: Reply with quote

一同娶来你
婉转的水 和
流萤的天街
——漂亮,问好!
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PostPosted: 2010-03-28 05:31:39    Post subject: Reply with quote

漂亮,问好!
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PostPosted: 2010-03-28 08:57:50    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢雨和大侠, 有你们妞妞会更漂亮 Very Happy
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