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春天　这无眠的大地

碧青
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Joined: 29 Mar 2009
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Posted: 2010-03-08 00:56:10 Post subject: 春天　这无眠的大地

春天　这无眠的大地闪动的雷声轻轻漂过从天空到土地叶芽　不再蛰伏大树的身躯站在原野不只是蓬勃的杏苞枝阳光如水风在吹　春天　这无眠的大地　　　　　　不必担心荷根守着的春泥不必担心荷根守着的春泥虽然　眼前的池塘里还没有一片叶子伸出来收集早春的雨滴它的隐匿也是天意根　早已醒在泥塘的深处它会带着尘世的一切把洁净开在荷里　　　　　　金色的海岸那一座钟楼站在金色的海岸已经很多年嘀嗒的钟声旋转或消失始终没有走出大海的波澜就像海色的天你来或去它都在那里蓝　　　　　　　　　　　　2010.3.5

杨海军
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Posted: 2010-03-08 21:25:28 Post subject:

这首诗不错啊，大家读一下，很有新意！！顶一下。 _________________ 走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮 ——拙作《离开村庄》 http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1269376751

吟啸徐行
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Joined: 03 May 2008
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Posted: 2010-03-08 21:54:43 Post subject:

大海的包容,从另一个视点写出来. _________________ 彰显自我爱好,弘扬民族文化,追求诗意生活.

碧青
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Posted: 2010-03-10 07:00:51 Post subject:

谢谢杨海军！问候！

碧青
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Posted: 2010-03-10 07:02:15 Post subject:

问好吟啸徐行！谢谢点评！

骨笛
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Posted: 2010-03-10 09:51:50 Post subject:

春天　这无眠的大地 _________________ 我把天空装在我家里，鸟儿天空中飞来飞去

碧青
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Posted: 2010-03-10 21:43:32 Post subject:

问好骨笛！送去春天的祝福！

安红红
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Posted: 2010-03-12 01:58:08 Post subject:

有禅意~~ _________________ 如果不开始，会失去过程。 QQ：3972083 微信：qisebaihuayuan

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