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你要看到柴草的无辜

韩少君
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Posted: 2010-02-14 01:57:41 Post subject: 你要看到柴草的无辜

献给那些孤独的人：孤独是全世界、全人类最严重的病痛之源：《你要看到柴草的无辜》一要盼望敌人来吗尽管刀刃是孤独的尽管烽火台是寂寞的尽管英雄的心是勇敢的要拒绝你吗我只有天窗的眼睛阳光的手指只有一颗白兔的心和地鼠的呼吸二那我也欢呼你为领地愤怒的人你不会鞭挞姬妾的衣裳尽管此刻衣服不在我们身上三那我也珍藏它并为此窃喜一生这枚戒指请永远不要告诉我是金是铜四愤怒的火你要看到柴草的无辜那水原本就有途径或旅途与泉擦肩而过或居家时没有掘井五受折磨的人你看看灰烬它曾离火最近现在距火最远 _________________ 靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345

阿依琼裙
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Posted: 2010-02-14 02:53:02 Post subject:

我只有天窗的眼睛阳光的手指只有一颗白兔的心和地鼠的呼吸问好少君，春节快乐！ _________________ 踏过废墟,走来 http://blog.sina.com.cn/m/weiyurong

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Posted: 2010-02-14 05:08:14 Post subject:

受折磨的人你看看灰烬它曾离火最近现在距火最远哲理的小诗，喜欢。新年好

韩少君
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Posted: 2010-02-14 15:38:22 Post subject:

问候阿依琼裙：祝你健康！祝你快乐！！ _________________ 靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345

韩少君
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Posted: 2010-02-14 15:46:47 Post subject:

问候白水 Moonlight：祝你顺利！祝你如意！！ _________________ 靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345

安红红
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Posted: 2010-02-15 02:42:50 Post subject:

每次都能看到献上的好图~~新年好~~ 孤独长结实了~~就长成花了~~石头花~~ 永开不败~光彩璀璨~~ _________________ 如果不开始，会失去过程。 QQ：3972083 微信：qisebaihuayuan

韩少君
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Posted: 2010-02-15 21:09:38 Post subject:

欢迎安红红光临----- _________________ 靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345

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Posted: 2010-02-16 05:40:32 Post subject:

真是漂亮~~~~谢谢少君！ _________________ 踏过废墟,走来 http://blog.sina.com.cn/m/weiyurong

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Posted: 2010-02-16 20:50:24 Post subject:

问好少君，春节快乐！ _________________ 陕西姜华

韩少君
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Posted: 2010-02-17 04:39:07 Post subject:

谢江南雨---- _________________ 靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345

韩少君
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Posted: 2010-02-17 04:41:23 Post subject:

_________________ 靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345

山桃花
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Posted: 2010-02-17 05:05:21 Post subject:

诗画人生！问候少君老师新春快乐！

韩少君
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Posted: 2010-02-17 19:26:19 Post subject: 写

谢谢桃花----- _________________ 靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345

方塘半亩
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Posted: 2010-02-17 19:59:07 Post subject:

犀利！ _________________ http://blog.163.com/bby_2000 倾倒文字，淡泊心情

韩少君
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Posted: 2010-02-18 17:15:38 Post subject:

谢方塘半亩： ----半亩方塘一鉴开，天光云影共徘徊。问渠那得清如许？为有源头活水来。 _________________ 靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345

吴景慧
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Posted: 2010-02-18 20:18:35 Post subject:

拜读！问好少君！ _________________ 诗是分行的文字，但不是所有分行的文字都是诗。写完了一首诗之后，自己再读一读，看看能不能先感动了你自己。http://blog.sina.com.cn/dongfanghui123

韩少君
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Posted: 2010-02-20 18:28:11 Post subject: 谢

谢景慧光临！祝新春快乐！ _________________ 靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345

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Posted: 2010-02-20 19:43:49 Post subject:

愤怒的火你要看到柴草的无辜》拜读，品味！

燕庄生铁
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Posted: 2010-02-21 13:10:45 Post subject:

受折磨的人你看看灰烬它曾离火最近现在距火最远这一首十分精彩。来学习。

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