zhangmin
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Joined: 13 Mar 2007
Posts: 450
Location: 中国.江苏.张家港
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 Posted: 2007-03-13 02:50:27 Post subject: 雨的记忆 |
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抓不住热情，纷飞
和季节的眼泪，撒下记忆
我走向你的雨天，忧伤
如纯洁地白，洒落一树绿叶
用烟雾挽留，没有敷衍
一朵花开下，依稀的雨季
阳光，背影，早已离去
谁打碎指尖的晶莹，用一缕音乐
送行。如窗外的勿忘我
中国.江苏.张敏 |
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三色堇
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Joined: 25 Nov 2006
Posts: 148
Location: 西安
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| Posted: 2007-03-13 03:06:07 Post subject: |
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| 结尾收的太急促了...... |
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左岸
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Joined: 12 Oct 2006
Posts: 215
Location: 中国大连
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| Posted: 2007-03-13 14:30:05 Post subject: |
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意象好，有断层的美。
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黑暗怎样焊住灵魂的银河 |
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赵福治
探花
Joined: 30 May 2006
Posts: 3456
Location: 中国北京
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| Posted: 2007-03-13 18:35:33 Post subject: |
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用烟雾挽留，没有敷衍
一朵花开下，依稀的雨季
阳光，背影，早已离去
.....典雅之美.提读. |
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