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【原创】我弄丢了亲情的钥匙
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PostPosted: 2009-04-06 16:53:22    Post subject: 【原创】我弄丢了亲情的钥匙 Reply with quote

我弄丢了亲情的钥匙



清明节将至,

总会找回一些失散的记忆。

比如大山和海。



望着活在石碑上的父母,

有麦芒刺破我的手指。

直捣内心。



昨日,我被水洗劫一空。



这一堆长满荒草的烂泥土竟然成了

阻隔亲情的一堵墙。我只能用跪拜的姿势

吐出两颗生病的牙齿。无需风的折磨,

眼睛早已找不到家。



亲爱的爸爸妈妈,

我再也无法打开亲情的大门。

放在你们手心的那把钥匙,

早已丢在了很深很深的梦里。



2009.04.03
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PostPosted: 2009-04-06 17:36:51    Post subject: Reply with quote

流泪了......
娇娇, 保重
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PostPosted: 2009-04-06 21:52:43    Post subject: Reply with quote

亲情的怀想
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PostPosted: 2009-04-06 21:58:33    Post subject: Reply with quote

昨日,我被水洗劫一空。


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PostPosted: 2009-04-06 22:24:54    Post subject: Reply with quote

远握!感动在你们的关怀里!祝福了三位!
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PostPosted: 2009-04-06 22:51:26    Post subject: Reply with quote

spring saddd
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PostPosted: 2009-04-06 23:23:58    Post subject: Reply with quote

望着活在石碑上的父母,

有麦芒刺破我的手指。

直捣内心。
————感动,也有同样的感受。
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PostPosted: 2009-04-07 07:11:34    Post subject: Reply with quote

感动~问好娇娇!
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PostPosted: 2009-10-12 12:10:01    Post subject: Reply with quote

看来你真的把亲情弄丢了
去吧 去找回亲情
别再让亲人伤心了~~~~~~~~
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PostPosted: 2009-11-06 00:35:23    Post subject: Reply with quote

hdzy2002 wrote:
看来你真的把亲情弄丢了
去吧 去找回亲情
别再让亲人伤心了~~~~~~~~

楼上的,我知道你是谁。大家都已经熟悉得不能再熟悉了,何必呢?有什么大不了的,关上门大家都是自己人。有什么不能逾越的吗?咱们之间。你在别的文章里留的言语更是叫一般人无法接受,是我的朋友帮我删去了,事先我并不知情,否则,我不会删掉的。我开始怀疑你的智商了,你这么精明的人怎么竟能无知到这一步?我巴不得有人在各大网站以及媒体公开骂我呢!这样一来我坐到家里就有人给开支了。多好啊!不过遗憾的是你把论坛给坑了,包括你自己。
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PostPosted: 2009-11-24 03:11:53    Post subject: Reply with quote

年轻时的叛逆,误解了很多事。有时很多小时候的事情常回想起


走过很多地方。漠然回首,亲情是唯一可以慰藉人的地方


唯一的:趁他们健在时,好好珍惜,听爸妈的话。
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PostPosted: 2009-11-24 03:15:56    Post subject: Reply with quote

问好娇娇,希望一切顺利。我现在很多事情,也后悔。也希望爸妈以后能理解我
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