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桥(双语)

非马
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Posted: 2009-09-27 01:52:16 Post subject: 桥(双语)

桥隔著岸紧密相握我们根本不知道也不在乎是谁先伸出了手 BRIDGE clasped together intimate and tight we really don’t know nor care who was the first to extend a hand （附注：此诗英文版被收入英国牛津大学编选的《牛津英文：国际入门学生课本2》，将于最近出版） _________________ 欢迎访问<非马艺术世界> http://feima.yidian.org/bmz.htm

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Posted: 2009-09-27 03:00:23 Post subject:

干练。问好！

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Posted: 2009-09-27 13:40:08 Post subject:

非马先生又一次为我们演绎诗。学习。诗文里，握（人的属性）与桥（功能）相互演绎，既形象又有意境。题与文相乘（乘法喽）将握与桥联系，我印象中诗里这还是首创。比喻简明，语义膨胀系数极大。 clasp 与 extend，有文字上的张力。我也喜欢这首的不完整翻译，尤其在对释的演变中，‘岸’字失去了，不见了岸，这有，禅意。 _________________ （在不斷的審醜裡終將建立起新的審美）

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Posted: 2009-09-27 14:13:58 Post subject:

汉英皆干净精彩，确实值得学习 _________________ I'm nobody! Who are you?

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Posted: 2009-09-27 14:24:47 Post subject:

博弈 wrote:

非马先生又一次为我们演绎诗。学习。
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博弈好! 在翻译成英文的时候,我发现岸字其实是可有可无的(桥总是架在两岸上),但大概当时觉得这首诗的字数已经少得够可怜,不忍心再删减,就让它幸存了下来.哈.
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Posted: 2009-09-27 14:28:05 Post subject:

也问孤雪及nobody好! 中秋愉快! _________________ 欢迎访问<非马艺术世界> http://feima.yidian.org/bmz.htm

安红红
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Posted: 2009-09-27 15:48:47 Post subject:

背下来了~~精巧~~问好~ _________________ 如果不开始，会失去过程。 QQ：3972083 微信：qisebaihuayuan

赵福治
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Posted: 2009-09-29 00:16:33 Post subject:

简练却蕴涵很多，问好老师。

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Posted: 2009-09-29 02:42:34 Post subject:

谢谢安红红及赵福治. 祝双节快乐! _________________ 欢迎访问<非马艺术世界> http://feima.yidian.org/bmz.htm

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Posted: 2009-09-29 02:57:37 Post subject:

太精了，学习。 _________________ 中国山东，女诗人

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Posted: 2009-09-30 21:41:02 Post subject:

意蕴深刻！ _________________ 个人博客http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1056295180

何君华
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Posted: 2009-10-01 15:02:13 Post subject:

已在博客中读过，再读，问好老师 _________________ 何君华

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