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二十二世紀從高雄港漂流

戀海
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Posted: 2009-08-04 20:38:38 Post subject: 二十二世紀從高雄港漂流

樹木和草原逐漸消失的呼吸頻率親愛的，漂流正要開跋夜行船隻一艘一艘穿過我們的胸膛我們的帆桅可以停靠哪裡？海岸風速六十米剛剛撞倒一座燈塔沒有燈光了在這離別島嶼的時刻我們用我們依偎的櫓槳划向經濟大陸分別的情緒果然很冷，高雄的十月下起千萬年來第一次雪雨這裡曾經點亮我們的世紀感情現在只賸餘幾千幾百根石柱守候海水倒灌氣象警告明天還會更低的溫度已經零下二十度了，你看你看我們的港口逐漸瑟縮成一碗夏日我們喜歡吃的黑糖剉冰

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Posted: 2009-08-04 20:43:03 Post subject:

這一帖要發表於現代詩歌專欄請版主將其轉移謝謝

qinghongh
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Posted: 2009-08-05 06:08:28 Post subject:

经济发展，环境堪忧。

nobody
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Posted: 2009-08-05 06:53:49 Post subject:

风格和题材有距离。当然这样说不严格。当然这可以唱好也可以唱衰。唱衰者会觉得有些隔靴搔痒 _________________ I'm nobody! Who are you?

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Posted: 2009-08-05 09:01:49 Post subject:

有特质的一首帮你转帖过来了，问好

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Posted: 2009-08-05 13:56:44 Post subject:

树木和草原逐渐消失的呼吸频率亲爱的，漂流正要开跋夜行船只一艘一艘穿过我们的胸膛我们的帆桅可以停靠哪里？海岸风速六十米刚刚撞倒一座灯塔没有灯光了在这离别岛屿的时刻我们用我们依偎的橹桨划向经济大陆分别的情绪果然很冷，高雄的十月下起千万年来第一次雪雨这里曾经点亮我们的世纪感情现在只剩余几千几百根石柱守候海水倒灌气象警告明天还会更低的温度已经零下二十度了，你看你看我们的港口逐渐瑟缩成一碗夏日我们喜欢吃的黑糖剉冰 _________________ 杯中冲浪.披履而行 http://blog.sina.com.cn/shoutao006

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Posted: 2009-08-05 13:58:35 Post subject:

语言形象，富有穿透力。 _________________ 杯中冲浪.披履而行 http://blog.sina.com.cn/shoutao006

戀海
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Posted: 2009-09-27 00:31:46 Post subject:

qinghongh wrote:

经济发展，环境堪忧。

這首預言詩
一方面點出環境破壞問題
一方面也試圖點出台灣經濟將來可能的困境

問好

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Posted: 2009-09-27 00:36:42 Post subject:

nobody wrote:

风格和题材有距离。当然这样说不严格。当然这可以唱好也可以唱衰。
...

謝謝詩友的意見
這首詩或許有點隔鞋搔癢
不過這樣的預言
或許還多一點空間
讓讀者可以思索
關於環境
關於經濟

問好

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Posted: 2009-09-27 00:37:57 Post subject:

杯中冲浪 wrote:

语言形象，富有穿透力。

問好
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