| 苏茉儿 秀才
 
 
 Joined: 31 Dec 2007
 Posts: 739
 
 苏茉儿Collection
 | 
			
				|  Posted: 2009-07-14 09:53:37    Post subject: 快意江湖 |   |  
				| 
 |  
				| 江湖这么小 为何 你我不能共赏一池桃花
 那还是还它给陶老人家吧
 我独自打酒 提剑 策马
 任长发留你一道万丈飞沙
 
 对!去我自己的世外
 我的世外绝不要桃花
 只要无边无际的荒沙
 掩埋所有关于你我
 桃花一样的 恩仇
 
 从此以后
 酒 是我喂养孤独的水
 水 是我打磨剑气的血
 血 是我忘记你的碑铭
 唰 唰 唰
 看我步步从容
 
 可为什么
 劈开西风的时候
 我眼中还是飘落一滴
 桃红色的记忆
 那就嘶啸一声
 再练它一壶酒 直至
 剑亡人亡
 _________________
 默默无言处,盈盈一笑间。
 |  | 
	
		| Back to top |  | 
	
		|  |  | 
	
		|  | 
	
		| 詩盜喜裸評 进士出身
 
  
 Joined: 15 May 2007
 Posts: 2984
 Location: 台湾,台北
 詩盜喜裸評Collection
 | 
			
				|  Posted: 2009-07-14 12:35:22    Post subject: |   |  
				| 
 |  
				| 完美的作品。 
 酒空人茫,剑断人亡。
 _________________
 可情可理,去捧就真
 |  | 
	
		| Back to top |  | 
	
		|  |  | 
	
		|  | 
	
		| 红袖添乱 秀才
 
  
 Joined: 09 Jan 2008
 Posts: 778
 
 红袖添乱Collection
 | 
			
				|  Posted: 2009-07-20 07:47:28    Post subject: |   |  
				| 
 |  
				| 不错,新尝试。来啦~~ _________________
 梦的一端是我脉脉的凝视,
 而另一端是你清澈的眼睛。
 |  | 
	
		| Back to top |  | 
	
		|  |  | 
	
		|  | 
	
		| 上城 进士出身
 
  
 Joined: 15 Mar 2007
 Posts: 2024
 Location: 江夏黄鹤楼
 上城Collection
 | 
			
				|  Posted: 2009-07-23 19:39:48    Post subject: |   |  
				| 
 |  
				| 唰 唰 唰 看我步步从容
 
 大女虾
 _________________
 每个诗人都很重要
 |  | 
	
		| Back to top |  | 
	
		|  |  | 
	
		|  | 
	
		| kli 秀才
 
 
 Joined: 30 Mar 2007
 Posts: 193
 Location: LONDON
 kliCollection
 |  | 
	
		| Back to top |  | 
	
		|  |  | 
	
		|  | 
	
		| 苏茉儿 秀才
 
 
 Joined: 31 Dec 2007
 Posts: 739
 
 苏茉儿Collection
 | 
			
				|  Posted: 2009-07-27 05:42:02    Post subject: |   |  
				| 
 |  
				| 谢大家。。嗯。俺只是,偶尔快意。:P _________________
 默默无言处,盈盈一笑间。
 |  | 
	
		| Back to top |  | 
	
		|  |  | 
	
		|  | 
	
		| 詩盜喜裸評 进士出身
 
  
 Joined: 15 May 2007
 Posts: 2984
 Location: 台湾,台北
 詩盜喜裸評Collection
 | 
			
				|  Posted: 2009-07-27 20:11:10    Post subject: 把侠女捞起来! |   |  
				| 
 |  
				| _________________
 可情可理,去捧就真
 |  | 
	
		| Back to top |  | 
	
		|  |  | 
	
		|  | 
	
		| 是有缘 秀才
 
 
 Joined: 08 Feb 2008
 Posts: 741
 
 是有缘Collection
 | 
			
				|  Posted: 2009-08-02 03:18:04    Post subject: |   |  
				| 
 |  
				| 江湖茫茫,人影茫茫,剑踪渺渺,滚滚红尘里留下了一支歌。 _________________
 蜻蜓点水非无意 愁云化雨是有情
 |  | 
	
		| Back to top |  | 
	
		|  |  | 
	
		|  | 
	
		| 苏茉儿 秀才
 
 
 Joined: 31 Dec 2007
 Posts: 739
 
 苏茉儿Collection
 | 
			
				|  Posted: 2009-08-05 07:34:45    Post subject: |   |  
				| 
 |  
				| 
 把俺捞起来,跟俺S了是的。诗盗有诗没有?
 _________________
 默默无言处,盈盈一笑间。
 |  | 
	
		| Back to top |  | 
	
		|  |  | 
	
		|  | 
	
		| 苏茉儿 秀才
 
 
 Joined: 31 Dec 2007
 Posts: 739
 
 苏茉儿Collection
 | 
			
				|  Posted: 2009-08-05 07:35:20    Post subject: |   |  
				| 
 |  
				| 
 
	  | 是有缘 wrote: |  
	  | 江湖茫茫,人影茫茫,剑踪渺渺,滚滚红尘里留下了一支歌。 |  
 后来,有缘兄轻轻唱起。。。:P
 _________________
 默默无言处,盈盈一笑间。
 |  | 
	
		| Back to top |  | 
	
		|  |  | 
	
		|  | 
	
		| 詩盜喜裸評 进士出身
 
  
 Joined: 15 May 2007
 Posts: 2984
 Location: 台湾,台北
 詩盜喜裸評Collection
 | 
			
				|  Posted: 2009-08-07 14:25:05    Post subject: 不S不S,人工呼吸一下。 |   |  
				| 
 |  
				| 
 
	  | 苏茉儿 wrote: |  
	  | 
 把俺捞起来,跟俺S了是的。诗盗有诗没有?
 |  
 诗,有!你下回来发。
 _________________
 可情可理,去捧就真
 |  | 
	
		| Back to top |  | 
	
		|  |  | 
	
		|  | 
	
		| 遛达的七七 秀才
 
  
 Joined: 07 Jun 2006
 Posts: 329
 
 遛达的七七Collection
 | 
			
				|  Posted: 2009-08-20 09:44:08    Post subject: |   |  
				| 
 |  
				| 来看侠女 
 
  |  | 
	
		| Back to top |  | 
	
		|  |  | 
	
		|  | 
	
		| 詩盜喜裸評 进士出身
 
  
 Joined: 15 May 2007
 Posts: 2984
 Location: 台湾,台北
 詩盜喜裸評Collection
 | 
			
				|  Posted: 2009-08-22 12:17:41    Post subject: 欢迎七小姐来落尘!谨请不吝发表。 |   |  
				| 
 |  
				| 
 
	  | 七小姐 wrote: |  
	  | 来看侠女 
 
  |  _________________
 可情可理,去捧就真
 |  | 
	
		| Back to top |  | 
	
		|  |  | 
	
		|  | 
	
		|  |