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快意江湖
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PostPosted: 2009-07-14 09:53:37    Post subject: 快意江湖 Reply with quote

江湖这么小 为何
你我不能共赏一池桃花
那还是还它给陶老人家吧
我独自打酒 提剑 策马 
任长发留你一道万丈飞沙

对!去我自己的世外
我的世外绝不要桃花
只要无边无际的荒沙
掩埋所有关于你我
桃花一样的 恩仇

从此以后
酒 是我喂养孤独的水
水 是我打磨剑气的血
血 是我忘记你的碑铭
唰 唰 唰 
看我步步从容

可为什么
劈开西风的时候
我眼中还是飘落一滴
桃红色的记忆
那就嘶啸一声
再练它一壶酒 直至 
剑亡人亡
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PostPosted: 2009-07-14 12:35:22    Post subject: Reply with quote

完美的作品。

酒空人茫,剑断人亡。
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PostPosted: 2009-07-20 07:47:28    Post subject: Reply with quote

不错,新尝试。来啦~~
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PostPosted: 2009-07-23 19:39:48    Post subject: Reply with quote

唰 唰 唰 
看我步步从容

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PostPosted: 2009-07-23 22:28:22    Post subject: Reply with quote

很快意
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PostPosted: 2009-07-27 05:42:02    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢大家。。嗯。俺只是,偶尔快意。:P
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PostPosted: 2009-07-27 20:11:10    Post subject: 把侠女捞起来! Reply with quote

苏茉儿 wrote:
江湖这么小 为何
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PostPosted: 2009-08-02 03:18:04    Post subject: Reply with quote

江湖茫茫,人影茫茫,剑踪渺渺,滚滚红尘里留下了一支歌。
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PostPosted: 2009-08-05 07:34:45    Post subject: Reply with quote

詩盜喜裸評 wrote:
苏茉儿 wrote:
江湖这么小 为何
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把俺捞起来,跟俺S了是的。诗盗有诗没有?
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PostPosted: 2009-08-05 07:35:20    Post subject: Reply with quote

是有缘 wrote:
江湖茫茫,人影茫茫,剑踪渺渺,滚滚红尘里留下了一支歌。


后来,有缘兄轻轻唱起。。。:P
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PostPosted: 2009-08-07 14:25:05    Post subject: 不S不S,人工呼吸一下。 Reply with quote

苏茉儿 wrote:
诗盗喜裸评 wrote:
苏茉儿 wrote:
江湖这么小 为何
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把俺捞起来,跟俺S了是的。诗盗有诗没有?


诗,有!你下回来发。
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PostPosted: 2009-08-20 09:44:08    Post subject: Reply with quote

来看侠女

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PostPosted: 2009-08-22 12:17:41    Post subject: 欢迎七小姐来落尘!谨请不吝发表。 Reply with quote

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