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听说我死了（外一首）

韩少君
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Posted: 2009-07-18 22:06:15 Post subject: 听说我死了（外一首）

听说我死了 ----致上官雨香听说了爱里泡着我的命这酒盏这两朵白云都是我灵魂的新坟听说了听说我死了诗里埋着我的骨凸起的字句是添坟的新土时空的蕊你暗物质隐匿的吸盘光的病灶我淬过火的蘸过盐的染过香的明亮星体你是我献身的牺牲的或同归于尽的美丽刑具 _________________ 靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345

白水
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Posted: 2009-07-19 15:54:01 Post subject:

看标题吓我一跳，看内容感觉还真不错

沙漠
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Posted: 2009-07-19 21:38:32 Post subject:

诗里埋着我的骨凸起的字句是添坟的新土生命与诗的交融，赞一个！ _________________ 个人博客http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1056295180

nobody
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Posted: 2009-07-19 23:23:08 Post subject:

不是我说的明明还有口气这两个都锻炼得铁骨铮铮的，跟以前的温柔情诗味道风格截然不同。 _________________ I'm nobody! Who are you?

杨海军
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Posted: 2009-07-20 10:49:20 Post subject:

我没听说过啊？你死了吗，明天去看看你，看看那座新坟。不错的诗。 _________________ 走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮 ——拙作《离开村庄》 http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1269376751

韩少君
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Posted: 2009-07-20 14:00:42 Post subject:

谢白水、沙漠、nobody和海军。问好。 _________________ 靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345

白水
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Posted: 2009-07-20 16:31:12 Post subject:

我怎么忘记一件大事，请同志们（昨天在网上看中央电视台的节目听到了这个倍感亲切的词）默哀三分钟

江南雨
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Posted: 2009-07-20 19:30:51 Post subject:

诗里埋着我的骨凸起的字句是添坟的新土生命与诗的交融，赞一个！ _________________ 陕西姜华

韩少君
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Posted: 2009-07-21 00:14:15 Post subject:

回白水：我上档次了----哈哈 _________________ 靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345

韩少君
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Posted: 2009-07-21 00:15:29 Post subject:

_________________ 靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345

燕庄生铁
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Posted: 2009-07-21 04:04:52 Post subject:

诗里埋着我的骨凸起的字句是添坟的新土欣赏平和温婉而劲道的语言。

翟营文
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Posted: 2009-07-21 21:21:37 Post subject:

语言有力度问候

子花
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Posted: 2009-07-22 13:42:10 Post subject:

短小而意味长！问候少君诗人！

韩少君
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Posted: 2009-07-22 22:09:20 Post subject:

谢燕庄生铁翟营文子花问好！ _________________ 靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345

安红红
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Posted: 2009-07-22 22:12:10 Post subject:

精短~立体感强~~ 问好~ _________________ 如果不开始，会失去过程。 QQ：3972083 微信：qisebaihuayuan

韩少君
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Posted: 2009-07-23 12:54:27 Post subject:

谢安红红！问好！ _________________ 靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345

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Posted: 2009-07-23 21:58:58 Post subject:

诗里埋着我的骨凸起的字句是添坟的新土这样的诗句叫人难忘。真好。 _________________ 是金子也会花光地

ggww
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Posted: 2009-07-23 22:49:41 Post subject:

哥哥问我吹不吹

江南雨
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Posted: 2009-07-25 03:18:44 Post subject:

诗里埋着我的骨凸起的字句是添坟的新土生命与诗的交融，赞一个！ _________________ 陕西姜华

韩少君
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Posted: 2009-07-27 11:00:52 Post subject:

谢江南雨 ggww 刘浪三位。问好！ _________________ 靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345

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