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小诗二首

情巅大僧
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Joined: 25 Jun 2009
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Posted: 2009-07-21 14:06:18 Post subject: 小诗二首

小诗二首文/丁金龙《无题》潜入萤虫的梦，潜入这夜色偷窥阳光在叶子背面留下的暗语不着一丝风声，我划过时间的表面试图深入掌纹，捕捉鱼影淡入这个炎夏的欲火在黑夜的云朵或划上几滴清水打湿一个水果的表面也许这样可以晶莹一个人的美梦也许我也可以潜入那个人的梦中用手语指点去路 2009年7月20日《暗示》打手语的人手心朝上，举过头顶我仰视苍天，一片瓦蓝空无一物的天空暗示我们什么这让我陷入比天空更空的深渊甚至抓不住一根羽毛甚至漂浮，我无法坠落打手语的人把右手的手心向下压在左手向上的指尖我视线跌落在他的背后的山顶奋力抓紧那棵孤独的柳杉不让自己被风，吹出天空以外 2009年7月21日

白水
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Joined: 02 Oct 2006
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Location: TORONTO
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Posted: 2009-07-21 15:58:16 Post subject:

潜入夜色，潜入萤虫的梦也许我可以潜入那人的梦中变成一只萤虫开个玩笑

情巅大僧
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Joined: 25 Jun 2009
Posts: 33

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Posted: 2009-07-21 17:17:46 Post subject:

白水真是会那样吧 _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1617043603

絮语沧浪
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Joined: 21 Jul 2009
Posts: 14
Location: Vancouver
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Posted: 2009-07-21 17:20:14 Post subject:

欣赏~：）

翟营文
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Joined: 17 Jul 2009
Posts: 21

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Posted: 2009-07-21 21:26:20 Post subject:

欣赏问候金龙兄

杯中冲浪
进士出身

Joined: 29 Sep 2006
Posts: 2891
Location: 中国
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Posted: 2009-07-21 23:33:04 Post subject:

整体感比较强，句子打磨的也不错。 _________________ 杯中冲浪.披履而行 http://blog.sina.com.cn/shoutao006

情巅大僧
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Posted: 2009-07-22 21:39:34 Post subject:

谢谢杯中冲浪的点评 _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1617043603

安红红
同进士出身

Joined: 07 Feb 2009
Posts: 1808

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Posted: 2009-07-22 22:06:29 Post subject:

要真能潜入他人的梦里看看~也是趣事~ _________________ 如果不开始，会失去过程。 QQ：3972083 微信：qisebaihuayuan

赵福治
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Joined: 30 May 2006
Posts: 3456
Location: 中国北京
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Posted: 2009-07-23 02:51:47 Post subject:

打湿一个水果的表面也许这样可以晶莹一个人的美梦 ....有想象.

情巅大僧
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Joined: 25 Jun 2009
Posts: 33

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Posted: 2009-07-24 19:10:15 Post subject:

谢谢安妹妹，谢谢赵兄！ _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1617043603

半溪明月
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Joined: 30 Sep 2006
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Posted: 2009-07-24 23:34:33 Post subject:

打手语的人把右手的手心向下压在左手向上的指尖我视线跌落在他的背后的山顶奋力抓紧那棵孤独的柳杉不让自己被风，吹出天空以外比了下这个手势，想知道有确切含义吗？是哑语吗？呵呵

情巅大僧
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Joined: 25 Jun 2009
Posts: 33

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Posted: 2009-07-27 18:42:16 Post subject:

这个手语的意思，是“天上乌云”的意思 _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1617043603

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