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诗歌投稿《北美枫》第六期。请多批评!
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PostPosted: 2009-06-20 23:47:45    Post subject: 诗歌投稿《北美枫》第六期。请多批评! Reply with quote

刘丽君的诗:





▲羊肉串

“嗨!说你呢。禹彤......”
带上你的小洛奇走远些
象阳光一样再远些吧!
你是知道的,小贝洛备受冷落
藏在被子一角偷偷地哭
突然你们都爱上羊肉串
所以晚餐离开我的房间
琢磨我厨房素豆腐斋了
君儿此刻如大师命令
孜然等小卒
齐刷刷站立粉末状
对着油锅大汗淋漓。


注:小洛奇(玩具猫)
小贝洛(南戴河
玩具熊)



▲流浪记......


“哎......小哥哥
让我们去流浪”
第一天我们去流浪岛
经过有钟表小鸟的房子
房间古怪的表情,清脆笛音
阳光不是很刺眼睛
这样我们不用害怕
用诗歌赞美它
还要听圣者对巫师教化
祈祷鲜花
"嘘......我们都不可大声说话"

第二天,我们沿着光线
遇到老人和孩童
包括病人,在水边,祈祷阳光和食物
我们也跟着虔诚祈祷
夜晚,回到木房子里
在月光的翅膀上
种下诗歌和信仰......

第三天,小哥哥
我们欢喜地走出木房子
走向森林
经过铁器
砍伐的林子
哭泣的鼻子
走向高山
在山上俯视
大地如种子渺小一层光晕里
(我们坐在山上休息)

第四天,我们下山
看太阳翻进大海
一切事物
眨着小牧师般的眼睛
拿着小木捶
对我们比划
我们被更新前所未有的思维......
“大海是温暖的
麻雀有家的
燕子是高飞的
川江会流到大海怀抱的
心是用来原谅的”
那么,历练里焕然一新。


▲骆驼


或许骆驼羡慕骡子和马有水分子那么富足
雌骡子有马厩,草料。如人们
可望而不可及的家。
可是骆驼属于大漠和细沙
骆驼,抬头不说话的时候如
沉默的老人。在沙漠甩起步伐,与仙人掌
构成大漠奇特的风景。
它们声讨着无水的日子,囤积着驼峰
可是人们能囤积什么呢?

电视里我看见骆驼渐渐走远
那的大漠荒沙灼热
骆驼打着一个一个哈欠
风儿抬起它们光滑的皮毛
一些头,够着日头。摇晃小骆驼的梦
为小骆驼们赛跑,或者走出绿洲。


简介:刘丽君,女。黑龙江省大庆市人,70后;大庆作家协会会员,曾用笔名爱月等发表作品。有作品散见于《岁月》文学、《绿风》《诗选刊》.下半月、《燕赵诗刊》《宝安日报.深圳打工文学周刊》、《大别山诗刊》、《澳洲彩虹鹦》、《赶路诗刊》、《北美枫.中国诗歌在线》、《大地诗刊》、《情诗季刊》等国内外官刊与民刊。作品有入选各类年选,有多人合集出版。诗歌获奖数次,曾做多家诗歌论坛站长版主与管理等。
诗观:诗是精神与思想艺术的精髓,诗歌是一场关爱的艺术,喜欢大自然与生命的人拥有诗歌是最快乐的,拥有诗歌的人是幸福的。诗者,人乃品性也。灵魂种下写诗的信仰;某一天会获得自由与飞翔。
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PostPosted: 2009-06-21 00:09:58    Post subject: Reply with quote

有童话色彩~问好爱月!
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PostPosted: 2009-06-21 02:03:30    Post subject: Reply with quote

问候明月,谢谢批评。
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PostPosted: 2009-06-21 16:13:42    Post subject: Reply with quote

可是骆驼属于大漠和细沙
骆驼,抬头不说话的时候如
沉默的老人。在沙漠甩起步伐,与仙人掌
构成大漠奇特的风景。
问好朋友,欣赏
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PostPosted: 2009-06-21 17:02:24    Post subject: Reply with quote

问好地依树朋友。
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PostPosted: 2009-06-23 13:54:06    Post subject: Reply with quote

给爱月姐提上!!问个好!
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PostPosted: 2009-06-24 03:58:29    Post subject: Reply with quote

Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2009-06-25 00:40:01    Post subject: Reply with quote

子花 wrote:
给爱月姐提上!!问个好!
谢谢。
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PostPosted: 2009-06-25 00:40:50    Post subject: Reply with quote

湮雨朦朦 wrote:
Very Happy
问候你。
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PostPosted: 2009-07-05 00:39:02    Post subject: Reply with quote

来欣赏爱月作品,引人入胜。
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PostPosted: 2009-07-05 00:47:20    Post subject: Reply with quote

的确不错,问好
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