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<<我这样描述>>
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PostPosted: 2009-06-28 16:44:24    Post subject: <<我这样描述>> Reply with quote

1.<<我这样描述>>
六月把金黄写进向日葵的内心
我充满惊喜 把我的旷野点石成金
一场转瞬即逝的婀娜 记忆是风
我在最妖娆处摆渡 成熟的播种
没有仇恨的春风

一朵葵花洗尽铅华 延伸着童年以及山坡的虫鸣
我无法掩饰日落的急切心情 落幕的东方
这样地描述你的眼睛 该起程了
六月是支神奇的画笔 在微薄中我遗失了
一个弟弟

天空露出朗朗的笑意 我重复着葵花
和她的秘密 笛声响起
我将在今晚吹一口仙气
把方向盘扭成另一个你


2.<<肯定在飞>>

我崇尚火 那是沸腾的血液在飞
我被高亢肢解 被六月的音乐发泄
体无完肤地泄密 大地再一次长出心和肺
我穿梭在琴声的细微处 啃食一只垂死的蝶
我认识的一只大鸟 逡巡着 送来迟到的树叶
音乐把我裹紧 蛙在星光中泯灭
小路向上 香甜向上 七月种植仙草
我和树林演奏一首煽情的音乐
流水渡过 蚂蚁排对
我从萤火虫的闪烁攫取永恒
在月光合成的宝盒里
再次起飞


3.<<走吧 六月>>

远离六月的枝条 我的咽喉梗塞着开遍紫花
的夏枯草 空气是情侣的
热风写着夏至 我们的山谷
六月的热度 以及五月的过去
在季节的牙齿里咀嚼 生吞活剥大鸟的翅膀
抛弃一些柔情 我擦试着水中的地平线
拾金不昧 走吧
六月 你的田野不再是我青春的丝线
偶像已经退役 在一只松果里
我发现了珍珠的泪
所有六月的露 是我想你的媚眼
在这片青翠欲滴的色彩里 六月
有了忧郁
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PostPosted: 2009-06-29 09:27:21    Post subject: Reply with quote

六月是支神奇的画笔 在微薄中我遗失了
一个弟弟


不好解。江西省南昌市,听来好亲切
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PostPosted: 2009-07-02 01:07:18    Post subject: Reply with quote

上城 wrote:
六月是支神奇的画笔 在微薄中我遗失了
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呵呵,请多提意见.问好.


难道你来过南昌?
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PostPosted: 2009-07-02 15:57:06    Post subject: Reply with quote

在南昌呆了四年,它的每一根毛细血管我都熟悉 Cool
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PostPosted: 2009-07-04 17:00:14    Post subject: Reply with quote

上城 wrote:
在南昌呆了四年,它的每一根毛细血管我都熟悉 Cool



原来如此,有空欢迎来玩.你现在哪?
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