ZY
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Joined: 20 Feb 2007
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Location: 台北
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 Posted: 2007-03-03 07:14:14 Post subject: 行者 |
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若我将尾随如影的步声
趁暗绞杀，这一地的风叶树荫
底下是否便真是诚实的寂静
仁者心动。我听见
一个挑担的行者走过寺院残破败落
旗子在风里，还是
风动在耳后。毕竟
若我将如影随形的诸多记忆
趁醉变卖，这一世送往迎来的时空
多少不免残败破落一如秋后
下戏卸妆的青衣向镜子里质疑的神色
已经是雪季了不是？
再走下去，脚步就无声了
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hepingdao
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| Posted: 2007-03-03 08:51:19 Post subject: |
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下戏卸妆的青衣向镜子里质疑的神色
已经是雪季了不是？
再走下去，脚步就无声了
非常精彩呀
建议加精
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郦楹
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| Posted: 2007-03-03 08:55:04 Post subject: |
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ZY
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| Posted: 2007-03-05 18:15:03 Post subject: |
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多謝和平島與酈楹的鼓勵了.
ZY問好.
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