Maple Review Home
   Chinese Literature Society of North America | Maple Review | Immigrants in Canada | Angel Studio | The Driftwood Artist Society | Ocean of Poetry | Island of Music
"HuaHe Cup" 2007 Chinese Mainland and Oversea Poetry Competition and Non-governmental Magazines and Newspapers Joint Exhibition starts on the first day of 2007.
  
 FAQFAQ   SearchSearch   MemberlistMemberlist   UsergroupsUsergroups   RegisterRegister  ProfileProfile    Log in to check your private messagesLog in to check your private messages   Sign inSign in   BlogsBlogs    Weblogs NewsWeblogs News   AlbumAlbum 
English Home Bilingual Home Chinese Home
Dictionary Check Poems' Rules & Forms Search for Chinese Poems Poetry & Music

Maple Review Home -> 现代诗歌 Post new topic   Reply to topic
何均二首
hejun
童生


Joined: 09 Apr 2007
Posts: 73

hejunCollection
PostPosted: 2009-05-14 15:17:28    Post subject: 何均二首 Reply with quote

红狐狸

深夜寂静着原野,摇醒
沉睡的红狐狸点亮
两盏灵魂的灯。天瓦蓝着
红狐狸。云洁白着梦想与星
原野松涛阵阵。活的寂静
翻腾着不息的血液
红狐狸不再沉默。苍茫的原野
奔驰。苍茫的原野不再黑暗
天空滑翔的火光
辉映沉寂的原野和灵魂



乡村寓言

夕阳西下五个牧童和五头牛
走过流水和桥。五个牧童骑牛
横笛晚归,进入村庄
的五个家。或五个牧童五头牛
走过流水和五座桥,进入村庄
的一个家。村庄消失五头牛
桥却有五个牧童蹦跳
玩耍。横笛悠扬夕阳与炊烟
_________________
何均
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message
白水
大学士


Joined: 02 Oct 2006
Posts: 14102
Location: TORONTO
白水Collection
PostPosted: 2009-05-14 16:03:27    Post subject: Reply with quote

一首深沉,一首情趣,强烈的画面感。
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message Blog
hejun
童生


Joined: 09 Apr 2007
Posts: 73

hejunCollection
PostPosted: 2009-05-15 22:40:07    Post subject: Reply with quote

问好白水,谢赏读。
_________________
何均
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message
戴玨
秀才


Joined: 03 Jan 2007
Posts: 808

戴玨Collection
PostPosted: 2009-05-17 06:30:58    Post subject: Reply with quote

不知這鄉村後半版本中那橫笛是誰吹的。
_________________
I labour by singing light
我的blog
我的專欄
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message Send e-mail Blog
慈林
秀才


Joined: 20 Dec 2008
Posts: 419
Location: 洛杉矶
慈林Collection
PostPosted: 2009-05-17 12:54:52    Post subject: Reply with quote

1, 空想的故事总显苍白无力.
2, 第二首意象很乱,看之头玄.
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message Send e-mail
Display posts from previous:   
Emoticons
Very Happy Smile Sad Surprised
Shocked Confused Cool Laughing
Mad Razz Embarassed Crying or Very sad
Evil or Very Mad Twisted Evil Rolling Eyes Wink
Exclamation Question Idea Arrow
View more Emoticons
Page 1 of 1           View previous topic View next topic    
Maple Review Home -> 现代诗歌    Post new topic   Reply to topic
Jump to:  


Once you post your works here, that means you submits them to the magazine of Maple Review (North American Maple, or BeiMeiFeng), a bilingual journal published by Chinese Literature Society of North America. The magazine holds the right to translate them into Chinese, and publish them in both languages. You need to be responsible for the copyright issues of your own files uploaded.
Powered by phpBB © 2001, 2005 phpBB Group
phpBB Chinese interface was translated by iCy-fLaME