| hejun 童生
 
 
 Joined: 09 Apr 2007
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				|  Posted: 2009-05-14 15:17:28    Post subject: 何均二首 |   |  
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				| 红狐狸 
 深夜寂静着原野,摇醒
 沉睡的红狐狸点亮
 两盏灵魂的灯。天瓦蓝着
 红狐狸。云洁白着梦想与星
 原野松涛阵阵。活的寂静
 翻腾着不息的血液
 红狐狸不再沉默。苍茫的原野
 奔驰。苍茫的原野不再黑暗
 天空滑翔的火光
 辉映沉寂的原野和灵魂
 
 
 
 乡村寓言
 
 夕阳西下五个牧童和五头牛
 走过流水和桥。五个牧童骑牛
 横笛晚归,进入村庄
 的五个家。或五个牧童五头牛
 走过流水和五座桥,进入村庄
 的一个家。村庄消失五头牛
 桥却有五个牧童蹦跳
 玩耍。横笛悠扬夕阳与炊烟
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		| 白水 大学士
 
  
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				|  Posted: 2009-05-14 16:03:27    Post subject: |   |  
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				| 一首深沉,一首情趣,强烈的画面感。 |  | 
	
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		| hejun 童生
 
 
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				| 问好白水,谢赏读。 _________________
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		| 戴玨 秀才
 
  
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				|  Posted: 2009-05-17 06:30:58    Post subject: |   |  
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				| 不知這鄉村後半版本中那橫笛是誰吹的。 _________________
 I labour by singing light
 我的blog
 我的專欄
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		| 慈林 秀才
 
 
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				| 1, 空想的故事总显苍白无力. 2, 第二首意象很乱,看之头玄.
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