| 曲元奇 秀才
 
 
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				|  Posted: 2009-04-14 21:52:40    Post subject: 无题二首 |   |  
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 走出书店
 像走出公墓
 摆脱了那些陌生的
 白骨的纠缠
 
 把刚买的诗集
 揣进怀里
 它的灵魂
 终于找到了一个傻瓜的肉体
 
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 中国
 粮食产量
 一年比一年高
 
 故乡
 土地化肥i农药的毒瘾
 一年比一年大
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		| 拈花微笑 秀才
 
 
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				|  Posted: 2009-04-15 04:00:09    Post subject: |   |  
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				| 更喜欢第二首。那悠然见南山的家园,如今安在? _________________
 瞠目结舌
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		| 詩盜喜裸評 进士出身
 
  
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				|  Posted: 2009-04-16 05:10:20    Post subject: |   |  
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				| 我选第一首,不为了寓意而寓意。 _________________
 可情可理,去捧就真
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		| 悠子 举人
 
 
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				|  Posted: 2009-04-16 10:38:56    Post subject: |   |  
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		| 曲元奇 秀才
 
 
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				|  Posted: 2009-04-17 17:49:24    Post subject: |   |  
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				| 谢谢 问好 |  | 
	
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		| 点点儿 秀才
 
 
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				|  Posted: 2009-04-19 18:21:57    Post subject: |   |  
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				| 也喜欢第一首, 可是N久没去书店了。居然一点儿也不惭愧, 颓废啊  _________________
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		| 詩盜喜裸評 进士出身
 
  
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				|  Posted: 2009-04-20 02:13:34    Post subject: 装满了惭愧的颓废。 |   |  
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	  | 点点儿 wrote: |  
	  | 也喜欢第一首, 可是N久没去书店了。居然一点儿也不惭愧, 颓废啊  |  _________________
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		| 曲元奇 秀才
 
 
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				|  Posted: 2009-04-23 21:15:00    Post subject: |   |  
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				| 谢谢 诗盗兄 各位诗友好 _________________
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		| 上城 进士出身
 
  
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				|  Posted: 2009-05-14 05:50:43    Post subject: N久没去书店了,居然惭愧。这是哪儿的话? |   |  
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	  | 也喜欢第一首, 可是N久没去书店了。居然一点儿也不惭愧, 颓废啊  |  
 最好别去书店。买不到一本好书(但去了又不能不买,就像
 女人常要去衣店看衣服,有时一年也穿不上两回,还是消费了一大堆)。想到“消费”,“真惭愧啊”
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		| 是有缘 秀才
 
 
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				|  Posted: 2009-05-21 15:04:21    Post subject: |   |  
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				| 读,还是要第一首 _________________
 蜻蜓点水非无意 愁云化雨是有情
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		| 红袖添乱 秀才
 
  
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				|  Posted: 2009-05-26 07:02:25    Post subject: |   |  
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				| 哈,傻瓜 _________________
 梦的一端是我脉脉的凝视,
 而另一端是你清澈的眼睛。
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