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清明节记事

杯中冲浪
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Posted: 2009-04-04 23:44:24 Post subject: 清明节记事

清明节 1 我姐姐送来很多冥纸她是我三大娘的女儿每年都不忘记这一天她不吃饭就匆忙回去她要赶回去烧纸她说婆家的林地缺钱 2 在老林点了五堆火，分别给老爷爷爷爷几个大爷和光棍平哥我说哥，这都是谁和谁我哥不说话。直念叨：都来取钱 3 我父亲独守一大片绿油油的麦地 “大，取钱”，我说 “大。取钱”，哥说我烧了很长时间的冥纸冥币元宝火不断灼疼我的手指几次我大叫我不知父亲究竟在不在家我侧起耳朵没听到回声 2009-4-5 _________________ 杯中冲浪.披履而行 http://blog.sina.com.cn/shoutao006

白水
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Posted: 2009-04-05 03:29:41 Post subject:

语言质朴,却令人感动.

吉林阿未
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Posted: 2009-04-05 04:42:46 Post subject:

很真诚。我刚刚乡下回来，正要写点什么呢，先学习

杯中冲浪
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Posted: 2009-04-05 18:43:26 Post subject:

谢谢评读。 _________________ 杯中冲浪.披履而行 http://blog.sina.com.cn/shoutao006

浪在天涯
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Posted: 2009-04-05 19:18:47 Post subject:

朴实，明了 _________________ 浪在天涯，曾用笔名冯雪、柳叶，现漂泊于江南某小镇，以文为生。 http://blog.sina.com.cn/guawaabc

吟啸徐行
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Posted: 2009-04-05 19:23:37 Post subject:

语言质朴,但感情真挚,开辟了健康为诗的方向. _________________ 彰显自我爱好,弘扬民族文化,追求诗意生活.

安红红
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Posted: 2009-04-06 08:05:01 Post subject:

在他乡~清明似乎也在他乡了~~读到这样的诗会想念那个世界的亲人~ _________________ 如果不开始，会失去过程。 QQ：3972083 微信：qisebaihuayuan

骨笛
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Posted: 2009-04-06 21:47:42 Post subject:

寓意深远 _________________ 我把天空装在我家里，鸟儿天空中飞来飞去

杯中冲浪
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Posted: 2009-04-08 02:18:35 Post subject:

感谢各位朋友，欢迎多批评。 _________________ 杯中冲浪.披履而行 http://blog.sina.com.cn/shoutao006

野航
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Posted: 2009-04-10 04:58:58 Post subject:

喜欢第３。 _________________ 回归自然回归心灵回归传统

半溪明月
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Posted: 2009-04-10 17:44:30 Post subject:

质朴感人。以前看过，再读，里面淡淡的痛仍触动人心~

骨笛
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Posted: 2009-04-12 22:14:06 Post subject:

苦的余温。再读。 _________________ 我把天空装在我家里，鸟儿天空中飞来飞去

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