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冰湖掠影

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Posted: 2007-02-26 20:35:50 Post subject: 冰湖掠影

冰湖掠影其实, 那些杯弓和井边的绳, 不过是你一个从断桥上飘然而至的白衣女子溶雪般流动的影把文人骚客的狼豪洗出一幅二月的江南水墨料峭的早春阳光日复一日的软了, 轻轻罩下来你张开手心接了这杯端午才该端起的美酒醉成一缕圣灵今天, 安大略湖畔还在飘雪缠绕着我, 如蜿蜒的风那些妙曼的白是你么捧起一瓣温柔冰冷的泪从我的指缝滴落一粒石头

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Posted: 2007-02-26 20:39:32 Post subject:

hepingdao
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Posted: 2007-02-26 21:00:07 Post subject:

好美呀飘逸起来 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

沙漠
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Posted: 2007-02-26 21:21:38 Post subject:

好意境！图文并茂！ _________________ 个人博客http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1056295180

杯中冲浪
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Posted: 2007-02-27 04:36:56 Post subject:

阳光日复一日的软了, 轻轻 _________________ 杯中冲浪.披履而行 http://blog.sina.com.cn/shoutao006

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Posted: 2007-02-27 05:15:24 Post subject:

捧起一瓣温柔冰冷的泪从我的指缝滴落一粒石头格式新颖，诗图并茂！ _________________ 黑暗怎样焊住灵魂的银河

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Posted: 2007-02-27 18:00:21 Post subject:

hepingdao wrote:

好美呀
飘逸起来
Very Happy

如hepingdao所言，飘逸！
_________________
闲情只自谴
雅趣向谁言

白水
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Posted: 2007-02-27 19:53:16 Post subject:

谢谢几位朋友鼓励, 还盼多提不足, 有批评才有提高

kokho
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Posted: 2007-02-28 00:37:53 Post subject:

文比图还美。。。。 _________________ 乒乓、摄影、诗歌

月光情怀
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Posted: 2007-02-28 05:24:37 Post subject:

很飘逸和轻柔的诗。不愧是诗人的情怀。来过，读过。 _________________ 在心的残缺处去完整诗的美丽 QQ：33179345 msn:wuxizhuo123456@hotmail.com 个人主页：http://hi.baidu.com/xizhuo欢迎光临。

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Posted: 2007-02-28 16:35:00 Post subject:

问好KOK, 月光情怀

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Posted: 2007-02-28 16:53:26 Post subject:

小和白水當雪日行過以一獨身女子的單薄二月擁抱湖岸枯林的靜默而零散的玻璃珠在風裡碰撞出碎聲春天呵還在遼遠的南方換上輕衫水墨裡的江聲開始在等待的眼眸中融解若一個文人在斷橋前思索未來殘雪已經把遲疑的節氣推托給候鳥帶來的氣流緩緩化凍的記憶開始在雪下的草尖蝡動寒陽像個獨身女子披了風衣踽踽行向春天還未走過的湖面鏡的冰層下水波正醞釀柔軟的湖光 2/28/2007 ZY﹐ 並問好 _________________ 陌生人遺落的足印們已經靜坐良久

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Posted: 2007-02-28 17:10:05 Post subject:

ZY wrote:

小和白水

當雪日行過以一獨身女子的單薄
二月擁抱湖岸枯林的靜默
而零散的玻璃珠在風裡碰撞出碎聲
春天呵還在遼遠的南方換上輕衫
水墨裡的江聲開始在等待的眼眸中融解

若一個文人在斷橋前思索未來
殘雪已經把遲疑的節氣推托給候鳥帶來的氣流
緩緩化凍的記憶開始在雪下的草尖蝡動
寒陽像個獨身女子披了風衣踽踽行向春天還未走過的湖面
鏡的冰層下水波正醞釀柔軟的湖光

2/28/2007
ZY﹐ 並問好

谢谢你的和诗, ZY
这是我不太熟悉的写作风格, 却让人深深体会到诗歌的美......
收藏了.

问好

云马贺铭
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Posted: 2007-02-28 19:17:31 Post subject:

巧，妙，美！ _________________ 风上面还是风更乱更强

三色堇
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Posted: 2007-02-28 20:37:26 Post subject:

这样的诗歌读来舒服,很轻灵的句子呢.

半溪明月
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Posted: 2007-02-28 20:47:21 Post subject:

你的诗歌也收藏学习了,很多次看到你诗中写到安大略湖,你在安大略省吗?

白水
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Posted: 2007-03-01 19:38:31 Post subject:

半溪明月 wrote:

你的诗歌也收藏学习了,很多次看到你诗中写到安大略湖,你在安大略省吗? Very Happy

月亮, 我在TORONTO, 是在安省

荷梦
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Posted: 2007-03-01 21:06:11 Post subject:

轻灵，飘逸的美。学习了~！

青海湖
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Posted: 2007-03-04 18:23:54 Post subject:

来读，问好！

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Posted: 2007-03-06 21:05:54 Post subject:

问好荷梦, 青海湖

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