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七绝. 春风
自然风
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PostPosted: 2009-04-02 04:41:30    Post subject: 七绝. 春风 Reply with quote
七绝. 春风

才吻寒梅桃李娇,
又缠羞月小竹摇.
难别神女奇峡梦，
犹恋西湖柳絮飘.
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白水
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PostPosted: 2009-04-02 18:27:00    Post subject: Reply with quote
才吻寒梅桃李娇,
又缠羞月小竹摇.

灵动,拟人
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自然风
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PostPosted: 2009-04-02 23:13:02    Post subject: Reply with quote
白水 Moonlight wrote:
才吻寒梅桃李娇,
又缠羞月小竹摇.

灵动,拟人

欢迎白水！
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冰清
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PostPosted: 2009-04-06 06:06:55    Post subject: Reply with quote
“吻”“缠”，很传神。
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qinghongh
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PostPosted: 2009-04-06 06:45:54    Post subject: Reply with quote
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“吻”“缠”，很传神。


这两字的确用得妙！
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自然风
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PostPosted: 2009-04-06 17:27:59    Post subject: Reply with quote
冰清 wrote:
“吻”“缠”，很传神。


原非如此，修改无数，方成这样。有赞誉，微欣慰。
谢了。
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自然风
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PostPosted: 2009-04-06 17:33:18    Post subject: Reply with quote
qinghongh wrote:
冰清 wrote:
“吻”“缠”，很传神。


这两字的确用得妙！

冰清过誉了。一首诗中，能有一二字句增色已是不错了，不敢奢望。
谢谢评点。
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自然风
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PostPosted: 2009-04-06 23:15:27    Post subject: Reply with quote
qinghongh wrote:
冰清 wrote:
“吻”“缠”，很传神。


这两字的确用得妙！

这妙字可受不起哦。
谢谢qinghongh来访！
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