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苹果
后现代刀子
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PostPosted: 2009-03-26 03:10:35    Post subject: 苹果 Reply with quote

是我把自己坐成一个角落的

在目光和目光的行驶中,我故意

藏到世界的外面。一匹白马

看到时间就像一条直立行走的河

缓缓地。与我擦肩

在路口处,同阳光一起消失不见

灭。一切都掉入墨里面

泪和水早已放弃挣扎

真的,你们也不要试图打捞我

至少是现在的我

此时的心情如一把风被折断

干脆。棱角戳疼了黑暗

多想点燃手指,亮

最起码能让我对自己不陌生

能让我感觉到自己还是一个苹果

即使在被吃掉之前就已经

没有味道了

可我毕竟曾认真的

甜过
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韩少君
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Joined: 06 Apr 2007
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PostPosted: 2009-03-26 16:25:47    Post subject: Reply with quote

water mellon hiiii
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靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345
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白水
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Joined: 02 Oct 2006
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PostPosted: 2009-03-26 18:41:19    Post subject: Reply with quote

即使在被吃掉之前就已经

没有味道了

可我毕竟曾认真的

甜过


好可爱.小刀削苹果时轻点哦 good boy
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后现代刀子
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PostPosted: 2009-03-26 20:24:45    Post subject: Reply with quote

韩少君 wrote:
water mellon hiiii


谢谢韩大哥过来捧场。
读韩大哥的《入殓》相当有感觉
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后现代刀子
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PostPosted: 2009-03-26 20:27:05    Post subject: Reply with quote

白水 Moonlight wrote:
即使在被吃掉之前就已经
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嘿嘿,白水呀。我是特别想削苹果的时候轻一点,可是时光削我的时候就太疼了。
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