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一匹通体透明的马

半溪明月
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Posted: 2007-02-28 02:53:48 Post subject: 一匹通体透明的马

一匹通体透明的马许多年了一匹通体透明的马只在梦中出现而你是身边的主角那年，接到你信的当晚就作了这样奇特的梦：一匹通体透明的马拴在后院的马厩它安静，优雅水井上跃出红鲤鱼喜悦飞溅着浪花我相信梦的暗示就像相信前生我们一定相识不然，少女初潮的梦中为何总默默走着一匹通体透明的马父亲将我扶上马背透明的马，你步履坚毅驮我翻山越岭，流浪远方山低过头颅水漫上足迹风吹拂你发亮的棕毛雨淋湿我们的眼睛爱人啊，你始终哒哒地走着停不住流浪的脚步而我，在你温暖的背上把幸福的泪淌成一条河你涉水而行踏乱了倒影 2007-2-28

白水
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Posted: 2007-02-28 16:27:56 Post subject:

明月, 你的诗歌越写越好了. 很喜欢

半溪明月
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Posted: 2007-02-28 20:42:36 Post subject:

呵呵，总要有点进步才行,和你比还差很远拉~

三色堇
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Posted: 2007-02-28 21:06:52 Post subject:

深情的诗歌

了因大兄
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Posted: 2007-03-01 04:11:42 Post subject:

那年，接到你信的当晚就作了这样奇特的梦：一匹通体透明的马拴在后院的马厩它安静，优雅水井上跃出红鲤鱼喜悦飞溅着浪花好诗。 _________________ 我不是树上的黑木耳，我被爱过不能随随便便不回家 http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1236932795

半溪明月
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Posted: 2007-03-01 04:55:01 Post subject:

三色堇 wrote:

深情的诗歌

谢谢三色堇,你的诗歌很有深度,很多论坛都看到,欢迎你去海上风论坛投稿~

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Posted: 2007-03-01 19:10:51 Post subject:

而我，在你温暖的背上把幸福的泪淌成一条河你涉水而行踏乱了倒影

云马贺铭
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Posted: 2007-03-01 23:35:29 Post subject:

山低过头颅水漫上足迹风吹拂你发亮的棕毛雨淋湿我们的眼睛爱人啊，你始终哒哒地走着停不住流浪的脚步而我，在你温暖的背上把幸福的泪淌成一条河你涉水而行踏乱了倒影很感动 _________________ 风上面还是风更乱更强

半溪明月
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Posted: 2007-03-02 04:54:48 Post subject:

问好了因大师兄,问好荷梦和贺铭~

kokho
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Posted: 2007-03-05 11:35:03 Post subject:

拜读　问好　；）。 _________________ 乒乓、摄影、诗歌

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