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《在梦中》外一
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PostPosted: 2009-02-23 19:14:46    Post subject: 《在梦中》外一 Reply with quote

《在梦中》


允许房屋拆除重建
允许猴子将人推下山崖
母亲将儿女碎尸万段
允许黑煤窑爆炸
朝民主扔鞋子。

允许情人间PK,汽车自杀
桃花水母搁浅泥淖。
允许近距离魔术耍如现实,
“我很激动”恍若唯一真言。
为了仍然相信,仍有希冀
原谅我允许一切的一切。

允许别人从“墓中设奠”说到“礼崩乐坏”。
允许两个毫不相干的人
被你梦中拉郎配。
允许天南海北的气象差异
一面酷似盛夏,一面冷若冰窖。

允许你自由出入我的梦境。
允许你沉默,如枯雨季节
岸柳垂首披头散发地等。
允许你将听筒搁置一旁
如我的再不倾诉。

在梦中,你要允许一个人
毫无痛苦地做梦,
且永不醒来。




《熟悉和陌生》

熟悉的没有更熟悉
陌生的也没有更陌生;
熟悉的正在变陌生
陌生的正在变熟悉。

既熟悉又陌生的是你
不熟悉和不陌生的是我;
熟悉和不陌生的是他
陌生和不熟悉的是她。
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PostPosted: 2009-02-23 21:18:22    Post subject: Reply with quote

在梦中,你要允许一个人
毫无痛苦地做梦,
且永不醒来。


让我们一起梦吧. 难得糊涂
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PostPosted: 2009-02-24 06:29:12    Post subject: Reply with quote

俺睡前就祈祷~~好梦入梦来~~

有时醒着也往梦境里躲~~

问好明月~~
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PostPosted: 2009-02-25 14:54:52    Post subject: Reply with quote

问好!这两首有些绕,
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PostPosted: 2009-02-27 01:48:31    Post subject: Reply with quote

真是个醒着的恶梦&&&
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PostPosted: 2009-02-27 02:25:39    Post subject: Reply with quote

一些生活的思考与疑惑,所以就有些子绕了!
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PostPosted: 2009-02-27 16:11:46    Post subject: Reply with quote

了兄批评的对,我该修复我这具有毁容般的激情写作~
一并问好荷梦、骨笛、安红红、白水兄~
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PostPosted: 2009-03-07 17:30:40    Post subject: Reply with quote

富有批判和质疑的精神。难能可贵!欣赏如此情怀。
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PostPosted: 2009-03-07 19:18:22    Post subject: Reply with quote

一切都事先被允许了,一切又都可笑地被原谅了!
------米兰。昆德拉 问候明月。美人节快乐!
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PostPosted: 2009-03-07 19:22:26    Post subject: Reply with quote

第一首好玩,第二首任性也很有意思。
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PostPosted: 2009-03-07 19:22:46    Post subject: Reply with quote

3·8节日快乐!
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PostPosted: 2009-03-07 22:28:29    Post subject: Reply with quote

商榷-----------表达上是不是有些故意了.
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PostPosted: 2009-03-07 22:34:52    Post subject: Reply with quote

允许你这样一边做梦一边写 Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2009-03-08 04:25:32    Post subject: Reply with quote

cyansharp wrote:
富有批判和质疑的精神。难能可贵!欣赏如此情怀。
问好西棣
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PostPosted: 2009-03-08 04:30:32    Post subject: 说 Reply with quote

韩少君 wrote:
一切都事先被允许了,一切又都可笑地被原谅了!
...
说道实质~问好!
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PostPosted: 2009-03-08 04:32:35    Post subject: Reply with quote

金金 wrote:
3·8节日快乐!
快乐~ Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2009-03-08 04:33:38    Post subject: Reply with quote

张凡修 wrote:
商榷-----------表达上是不是有些故意了.
你是说第一首还是第二首?问好!
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PostPosted: 2009-03-08 04:35:24    Post subject: Reply with quote

nobody wrote:
允许你这样一边做梦一边写 Very Happy
神经衰弱就总会做梦,呵呵,我吧神经锻炼地强壮点~ Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2009-03-08 10:15:17    Post subject: Reply with quote

节日快乐~虽然晚了~昨天怎么也无法打开网页~是不是我离服务器太远了缘故~~

借此贴子祝所有的女同学节日快乐~~
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