Maple Review Home
   Chinese Literature Society of North America | Maple Review | Immigrants in Canada | Angel Studio | The Driftwood Artist Society | Ocean of Poetry | Island of Music
"HuaHe Cup" 2007 Chinese Mainland and Oversea Poetry Competition and Non-governmental Magazines and Newspapers Joint Exhibition starts on the first day of 2007.
  
 FAQFAQ   SearchSearch   MemberlistMemberlist   UsergroupsUsergroups   RegisterRegister  ProfileProfile    Log in to check your private messagesLog in to check your private messages   Sign inSign in   BlogsBlogs    Weblogs NewsWeblogs News   AlbumAlbum 
English Home Bilingual Home Chinese Home
Dictionary Check Poems' Rules & Forms Search for Chinese Poems Poetry & Music

Maple Review Home -> 现代诗歌 Post new topic   Reply to topic
寄语1[2]  Next
白水
大学士


Joined: 02 Oct 2006
Posts: 14102
Location: TORONTO
白水Collection
PostPosted: 2009-02-19 14:11:35    Post subject: 寄语 Reply with quote

寄语

题记:有人说,一块石头扔进水面,激起的波纹将无限止的传播,这就是微积分的物理原型

为之而动的是你摇曳的晶杯
琼浆的潮涌
醉于林海的人
无暇仰视
仰视悬于树梢的一叶
姹紫或是嫣红

深秋
当你步入枫林幽径
脚下通往山巅那紫红色的地毯
哪一片
不是迎风起飞
从枝头欣然飘落?

爱,爱就爱这
天地神游的感觉。其实那年
当我随江水决堤而去
自由之身已经渗入
渗入你的年轮
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message Blog
hepingdao
Site Admin


Joined: 25 May 2006
Posts: 8106

hepingdaoCollection
PostPosted: 2009-02-19 14:18:41    Post subject: Reply with quote

爱,爱就爱这
天地神游的感觉。其实那年
当我随江水决堤而去
自由之身已经渗入
渗入你的年轮
_________________
为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message Send e-mail Blog
nobody
进士出身


Joined: 31 Dec 2006
Posts: 2651
Location: Madtown
nobodyCollection
PostPosted: 2009-02-19 17:54:58    Post subject: Reply with quote

当我随江水决堤而去
很酷的感觉。

这一阵很枫啊,哈哈。
_________________
I'm nobody! Who are you?
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message Send e-mail Blog
白水
大学士


Joined: 02 Oct 2006
Posts: 14102
Location: TORONTO
白水Collection
PostPosted: 2009-02-19 18:53:35    Post subject: Reply with quote

hepingdao wrote:
爱,爱就爱这
天地神游的感觉。其实那年
当我随江水决堤而去
自由之身已经渗入
渗入你的年轮
...


看来也融入枫林了 Very Happy
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message Blog
白水
大学士


Joined: 02 Oct 2006
Posts: 14102
Location: TORONTO
白水Collection
PostPosted: 2009-02-19 19:05:05    Post subject: Reply with quote

nobody wrote:
当我随江水决堤而去
很酷的感觉。

这一阵很枫啊,哈哈。


移民潮啊.你当初不也这么酷酷的流出来了,壮士一去不复返似的, 夜里又偷着思乡Razz

身在枫叶国, 不"枫" 行吗? 不过这枫林并不仅仅代表canada, 而是一种生存环境吧 Embarassed
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message Blog
吟啸徐行
举人


Joined: 03 May 2008
Posts: 1336
Location: 中国安徽
吟啸徐行Collection
PostPosted: 2009-02-19 20:36:24    Post subject: Reply with quote

诗句末尾,突发奇想,一下使境界阔大.
_________________
彰显自我爱好,弘扬民族文化,追求诗意生活.
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message
白水
大学士


Joined: 02 Oct 2006
Posts: 14102
Location: TORONTO
白水Collection
PostPosted: 2009-02-21 02:47:34    Post subject: Reply with quote

吟啸徐行 wrote:
诗句末尾,突发奇想,一下使境界阔大.


谢谢理解.
为什么出国,是移民生活中常被问到的问题. 每个人有不同的回答.这是其中一种吧.很多人出国前有着稳定的事业或人生, 好像挂在树稍的叶子,而他们却舍弃这些去寻求新的生活, 飞翔,飘落......一代又一代移民用他们的艰辛铺就了一条全新的路. 一片落叶溶入林海,犹如一块石头扔进水面,,,,,,
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message Blog
骨笛
秀才


Joined: 03 Jan 2009
Posts: 547

骨笛Collection
PostPosted: 2009-02-21 04:36:52    Post subject: Reply with quote

留也好,走也对。都是活着。。
_________________
我把天空装在我家里,鸟儿天空中飞来飞去
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message Blog Visit poster's website
白水
大学士


Joined: 02 Oct 2006
Posts: 14102
Location: TORONTO
白水Collection
PostPosted: 2009-02-21 16:44:43    Post subject: Reply with quote

骨笛 wrote:
留也好,走也对。都是活着。。


哈,骨笛, 有点道理. Wink
问好
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message Blog
中国湖北:文胜
秀才


Joined: 20 Dec 2007
Posts: 149
Location: 中国湖北省襄樊市
中国湖北:文胜Collection
PostPosted: 2009-02-21 22:08:25    Post subject: Reply with quote

味道浓!问好白小姐。
_________________
无他。爱诗,仅此。
诗心、歌爱、走路。足矣!
个人网站http://blog.sina.com.cn/ak5hmwz79sytbd0d
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message Send e-mail Visit poster's website
安红红
同进士出身


Joined: 07 Feb 2009
Posts: 1808

安红红Collection
PostPosted: 2009-02-21 22:48:27    Post subject: Reply with quote

落得久了~他乡似乎也是故乡~~

问好~
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message Send e-mail Blog
姜慕水
秀才


Joined: 20 Jan 2009
Posts: 104

姜慕水Collection
PostPosted: 2009-02-22 00:06:28    Post subject: Reply with quote

移民也许出于一种被裹挟的力量,身不由己!但无论如何,活出真实的自己,最为重要。很不错的诗歌,握手问好!
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message
白水
大学士


Joined: 02 Oct 2006
Posts: 14102
Location: TORONTO
白水Collection
PostPosted: 2009-02-22 05:59:52    Post subject: Reply with quote

中国湖北:文胜 wrote:
味道浓!问好白小姐。


谢谢鼓励,问好文胜.
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message Blog
白水
大学士


Joined: 02 Oct 2006
Posts: 14102
Location: TORONTO
白水Collection
PostPosted: 2009-02-22 06:03:18    Post subject: Reply with quote

安红红 wrote:
落得久了~他乡似乎也是故乡~~

问好~


活出真实的自己,最为重要. 借言 Razz 问好红红
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message Blog
白水
大学士


Joined: 02 Oct 2006
Posts: 14102
Location: TORONTO
白水Collection
PostPosted: 2009-02-22 06:06:07    Post subject: Reply with quote

姜慕水 wrote:
移民也许出于一种被裹挟的力量,身不由己!但无论如何,活出真实的自己,最为重要。很不错的诗歌,握手问好!


活出真实的自己,最为重要。

谢谢理解, 非常感谢.问好.
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message Blog
qinghongh
榜眼


Joined: 14 Oct 2007
Posts: 4110

qinghonghCollection
PostPosted: 2009-02-22 16:25:29    Post subject: Reply with quote

白水 Moonlight wrote:
寄语枫林

题记:有人说,一块石头扔进水面,激起的波纹将无限止的传播,这就是微积分的物理原型
...


枫叶随风而飘,
却有脱离羁绊的自由;
虽飘泊天涯,
却有牵挂的乡愁。
一片片枫叶,
一缕缕乡愁,
望断天涯,
梦起吴钩。。。
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message
半溪明月
榜眼


Joined: 30 Sep 2006
Posts: 4760

半溪明月Collection
PostPosted: 2009-02-23 04:54:03    Post subject: Reply with quote

几首枫,这首原来是新的。
这首结尾提升的很好,境界开阔~
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message Send e-mail Blog
俞伟远
秀才


Joined: 02 Feb 2007
Posts: 282

俞伟远Collection
PostPosted: 2009-02-23 22:36:15    Post subject: Reply with quote

当我随江水决堤而去
自由之身已经渗入
渗入你的年轮

问好诗友
_________________
俞伟远:1967生,1987大学毕业、工作。1990年后几乎与诗绝缘,2006年春重拾笔,感悟生活,凝望心灵,自得其乐。http://blog.sina.com.cn/txyuweiyuan
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message
娇娇
秀才


Joined: 18 Nov 2008
Posts: 124
Location: 吉林四平
娇娇Collection
PostPosted: 2009-02-24 00:07:43    Post subject: Reply with quote

喜欢白水的文字!在哪里不重要,重要的是心情!只要我们活得开心就好!默默地祝福着......
_________________
每段路都有蹊径,向着阳光延伸!
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message Visit poster's website
白水
大学士


Joined: 02 Oct 2006
Posts: 14102
Location: TORONTO
白水Collection
PostPosted: 2009-02-26 12:42:19    Post subject: Reply with quote

qinghongh, 谢谢你的诗歌,很喜欢。

问好月亮,伟远。娇娇,有你的祝福我们会活得更开心 Very Happy
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message Blog
Display posts from previous:   
Emoticons
Very Happy Smile Sad Surprised
Shocked Confused Cool Laughing
Mad Razz Embarassed Crying or Very sad
Evil or Very Mad Twisted Evil Rolling Eyes Wink
Exclamation Question Idea Arrow
View more Emoticons
1[2]  Next Page 1 of 2           View previous topic View next topic    
Maple Review Home -> 现代诗歌    Post new topic   Reply to topic
Jump to:  


Once you post your works here, that means you submits them to the magazine of Maple Review (North American Maple, or BeiMeiFeng), a bilingual journal published by Chinese Literature Society of North America. The magazine holds the right to translate them into Chinese, and publish them in both languages. You need to be responsible for the copyright issues of your own files uploaded.
Powered by phpBB © 2001, 2005 phpBB Group
phpBB Chinese interface was translated by iCy-fLaME