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白水
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Posted: 2009-02-19 14:11:35 Post subject: 寄语

寄语题记：有人说，一块石头扔进水面，激起的波纹将无限止的传播，这就是微积分的物理原型为之而动的是你摇曳的晶杯琼浆的潮涌醉于林海的人无暇仰视仰视悬于树梢的一叶姹紫或是嫣红深秋当你步入枫林幽径脚下通往山巅那紫红色的地毯哪一片不是迎风起飞从枝头欣然飘落? 爱，爱就爱这天地神游的感觉。其实那年当我随江水决堤而去自由之身已经渗入渗入你的年轮

hepingdao
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Posted: 2009-02-19 14:18:41 Post subject:

爱，爱就爱这天地神游的感觉。其实那年当我随江水决堤而去自由之身已经渗入渗入你的年轮 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

nobody
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Posted: 2009-02-19 17:54:58 Post subject:

当我随江水决堤而去很酷的感觉。这一阵很枫啊，哈哈。 _________________ I'm nobody! Who are you?

白水
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Posted: 2009-02-19 18:53:35 Post subject:

hepingdao wrote:

爱，爱就爱这
天地神游的感觉。其实那年
当我随江水决堤而去
自由之身已经渗入
渗入你的年轮
...

看来也融入枫林了

白水
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Posted: 2009-02-19 19:05:05 Post subject:

nobody wrote:

当我随江水决堤而去
很酷的感觉。

这一阵很枫啊，哈哈。

移民潮啊.你当初不也这么酷酷的流出来了,壮士一去不复返似的, 夜里又偷着思乡 Razz

身在枫叶国, 不"枫" 行吗? 不过这枫林并不仅仅代表canada, 而是一种生存环境吧 Embarassed

吟啸徐行
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Posted: 2009-02-19 20:36:24 Post subject:

诗句末尾，突发奇想，一下使境界阔大． _________________ 彰显自我爱好,弘扬民族文化,追求诗意生活.

白水
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Posted: 2009-02-21 02:47:34 Post subject:

吟啸徐行 wrote:

诗句末尾，突发奇想，一下使境界阔大．

谢谢理解.
为什么出国,是移民生活中常被问到的问题. 每个人有不同的回答.这是其中一种吧.很多人出国前有着稳定的事业或人生, 好像挂在树稍的叶子,而他们却舍弃这些去寻求新的生活, 飞翔,飘落......一代又一代移民用他们的艰辛铺就了一条全新的路. 一片落叶溶入林海,犹如一块石头扔进水面,,,,,,

骨笛
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Posted: 2009-02-21 04:36:52 Post subject:

留也好，走也对。都是活着。。 _________________ 我把天空装在我家里，鸟儿天空中飞来飞去

白水
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Posted: 2009-02-21 16:44:43 Post subject:

骨笛 wrote:

留也好，走也对。都是活着。。

哈,骨笛, 有点道理. Wink

问好

中国湖北:文胜
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Posted: 2009-02-21 22:08:25 Post subject:

味道浓！问好白小姐。 _________________ 无他。爱诗，仅此。诗心、歌爱、走路。足矣！个人网站http://blog.sina.com.cn/ak5hmwz79sytbd0d

安红红
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Posted: 2009-02-21 22:48:27 Post subject:

落得久了～他乡似乎也是故乡～～问好～

姜慕水
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Posted: 2009-02-22 00:06:28 Post subject:

移民也许出于一种被裹挟的力量，身不由己！但无论如何，活出真实的自己，最为重要。很不错的诗歌，握手问好！

白水
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Posted: 2009-02-22 05:59:52 Post subject:

中国湖北:文胜 wrote:

味道浓！问好白小姐。

谢谢鼓励,问好文胜.

白水
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Posted: 2009-02-22 06:03:18 Post subject:

安红红 wrote:

落得久了～他乡似乎也是故乡～～

问好～

活出真实的自己，最为重要. 借言 Razz

问好红红

白水
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Posted: 2009-02-22 06:06:07 Post subject:

姜慕水 wrote:

移民也许出于一种被裹挟的力量，身不由己！但无论如何，活出真实的自己，最为重要。很不错的诗歌，握手问好！

活出真实的自己，最为重要。

谢谢理解, 非常感谢.问好.

qinghongh
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Posted: 2009-02-22 16:25:29 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

寄语枫林

题记：有人说，一块石头扔进水面，激起的波纹将无限止的传播，这就是微积分的物理原型
...

枫叶随风而飘，
却有脱离羁绊的自由；
虽飘泊天涯，
却有牵挂的乡愁。
一片片枫叶，
一缕缕乡愁，
望断天涯，
梦起吴钩。。。

半溪明月
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Posted: 2009-02-23 04:54:03 Post subject:

几首枫，这首原来是新的。这首结尾提升的很好，境界开阔~

俞伟远
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Posted: 2009-02-23 22:36:15 Post subject:

当我随江水决堤而去自由之身已经渗入渗入你的年轮问好诗友 _________________ 俞伟远：１９６７生，１９８７大学毕业、工作。19９０年后几乎与诗绝缘，2006年春重拾笔，感悟生活，凝望心灵，自得其乐。http://blog.sina.com.cn/txyuweiyuan

娇娇
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Posted: 2009-02-24 00:07:43 Post subject:

喜欢白水的文字！在哪里不重要，重要的是心情！只要我们活得开心就好！默默地祝福着...... _________________ 每段路都有蹊径，向着阳光延伸！

白水
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Posted: 2009-02-26 12:42:19 Post subject:

qinghongh，谢谢你的诗歌，很喜欢。问好月亮，伟远。娇娇，有你的祝福我们会活得更开心

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