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空洞

杯中冲浪
进士出身

Joined: 29 Sep 2006
Posts: 2891
Location: 中国
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Posted: 2009-02-20 19:39:50 Post subject: 空洞

空洞有人在我的胸廓拆掉一根肋又拆掉 …… 总共拆掉三根我说我不行了冷风飕飕的马上我意识到问题极为严重我去摸黑洞洞的空我缩回自己的手放在阳光里看血几滴紫色犯冷 …… 2009-2-21 _________________ 杯中冲浪.披履而行 http://blog.sina.com.cn/shoutao006

半溪明月
榜眼

Joined: 30 Sep 2006
Posts: 4760

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Posted: 2009-02-20 20:48:40 Post subject:

我说我不行了冷风飕飕的马上我意识到问题极为严重写得有趣耐心寻味~

白水
大学士

Joined: 02 Oct 2006
Posts: 14102
Location: TORONTO
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Posted: 2009-02-21 02:06:36 Post subject:

空洞,冷风飕飕......空穴来风

骨笛
秀才

Joined: 03 Jan 2009
Posts: 547

骨笛Collection

Posted: 2009-02-21 05:01:49 Post subject:

风飕飕的让人猜度不已 _________________ 我把天空装在我家里，鸟儿天空中飞来飞去

杯中冲浪
进士出身

Joined: 29 Sep 2006
Posts: 2891
Location: 中国
杯中冲浪Collection

Posted: 2009-02-21 23:02:48 Post subject:

谢谢朋友们。 _________________ 杯中冲浪.披履而行 http://blog.sina.com.cn/shoutao006

孙国福
童生

Joined: 08 Feb 2009
Posts: 63
Location: 吉林长春
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Posted: 2009-02-22 03:45:02 Post subject:

让人浮想联翩！问好！ _________________ 在这片贫瘠的土地上我播种苦难收获苦难来磨砺我思想的剑

安红红
同进士出身

Joined: 07 Feb 2009
Posts: 1808

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Posted: 2009-02-22 08:05:23 Post subject:

想成电影～～就是凶杀片看着题目～或是幻境吧～问好～冲浪～ _________________ 如果不开始，会失去过程。 QQ：3972083 微信：qisebaihuayuan

陈陈
童生

Joined: 23 Jan 2009
Posts: 46

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Posted: 2009-02-22 12:19:18 Post subject:

杨海军
进士出身

Joined: 01 Mar 2007
Posts: 2205
Location: 吉林
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Posted: 2009-02-22 14:40:44 Post subject:

好！！！！！喜欢！！！每个人都有一样的感觉。 _________________ 走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮 ——拙作《离开村庄》 http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1269376751

杯中冲浪
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Joined: 29 Sep 2006
Posts: 2891
Location: 中国
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Posted: 2009-02-22 18:29:31 Post subject:

谢谢朋友们。 _________________ 杯中冲浪.披履而行 http://blog.sina.com.cn/shoutao006

nobody
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Joined: 31 Dec 2006
Posts: 2651
Location: Madtown
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Posted: 2009-02-23 04:33:32 Post subject:

经常弄些恐怖悬疑片吓人 _________________ I'm nobody! Who are you?

杯中冲浪
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Posted: 2009-02-23 16:50:04 Post subject:

nobody wrote:

经常弄些恐怖悬疑片吓人 Very Happy

你家里又没人，害什么怕！
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张南城
秀才

Joined: 02 Aug 2009
Posts: 145
Location: 中国安庆
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Posted: 2009-08-13 04:42:44 Post subject:

喜欢朋友的诗。我理解肋骨被抽掉的感觉。心肺失去了安全，脊梁没有了支撑。挺不起腰，壮不了胆。冰冷的风吹进去，紫色的血流出来……

翔之
童生

Joined: 20 Jul 2009
Posts: 23

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Posted: 2009-08-13 19:47:18 Post subject:

我不行了冷风飕飕的 _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1233442293

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