杯中冲浪 进士出身
Joined: 29 Sep 2006 Posts: 2891 Location: 中国 杯中冲浪Collection |
Posted: 2009-02-20 19:39:50 Post subject: 空洞 |
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空洞
有人
在我的胸廓
拆掉
一根
肋
又
拆掉
……
总共拆掉三根
我说
我不行了
冷风飕飕的
马上我意识到问题极为严重
我去摸
黑洞洞的
空
我缩回自己的手
放在阳光里
看
血
几滴
紫色
犯冷
……
2009-2-21 _________________ 杯中冲浪.披履而行
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半溪明月 榜眼
Joined: 30 Sep 2006 Posts: 4760
半溪明月Collection |
Posted: 2009-02-20 20:48:40 Post subject: |
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我说
我不行了
冷风飕飕的
马上我意识到问题极为严重
写得有趣耐心寻味~ |
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白水 大学士
Joined: 02 Oct 2006 Posts: 14102 Location: TORONTO 白水Collection |
Posted: 2009-02-21 02:06:36 Post subject: |
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空洞,冷风飕飕......空穴来风 |
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骨笛 秀才
Joined: 03 Jan 2009 Posts: 547
骨笛Collection |
Posted: 2009-02-21 05:01:49 Post subject: |
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风飕飕的让人猜度不已 _________________ 我把天空装在我家里,鸟儿天空中飞来飞去 |
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杯中冲浪 进士出身
Joined: 29 Sep 2006 Posts: 2891 Location: 中国 杯中冲浪Collection |
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孙国福 童生
Joined: 08 Feb 2009 Posts: 63 Location: 吉林长春 孙国福Collection |
Posted: 2009-02-22 03:45:02 Post subject: |
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让人浮想联翩!问好! _________________ 在这片贫瘠的土地上我播种苦难收获苦难来磨砺我思想的剑 |
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安红红 同进士出身
Joined: 07 Feb 2009 Posts: 1808
安红红Collection |
Posted: 2009-02-22 08:05:23 Post subject: |
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想成电影~~就是凶杀片
看着题目~或是幻境吧~
问好~冲浪~ _________________ 如果不开始,会失去过程。
QQ:3972083
微信:qisebaihuayuan |
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陈陈 童生
Joined: 23 Jan 2009 Posts: 46
陈陈Collection |
Posted: 2009-02-22 12:19:18 Post subject: |
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杨海军 进士出身
Joined: 01 Mar 2007 Posts: 2205 Location: 吉林 杨海军Collection |
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杯中冲浪 进士出身
Joined: 29 Sep 2006 Posts: 2891 Location: 中国 杯中冲浪Collection |
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nobody 进士出身
Joined: 31 Dec 2006 Posts: 2651 Location: Madtown nobodyCollection |
Posted: 2009-02-23 04:33:32 Post subject: |
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经常弄些恐怖悬疑片吓人 _________________ I'm nobody! Who are you? |
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杯中冲浪 进士出身
Joined: 29 Sep 2006 Posts: 2891 Location: 中国 杯中冲浪Collection |
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张南城 秀才
Joined: 02 Aug 2009 Posts: 145 Location: 中国安庆 张南城Collection |
Posted: 2009-08-13 04:42:44 Post subject: |
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喜欢朋友的诗。
我理解肋骨被抽掉的感觉。
心肺失去了安全,脊梁没有了支撑。挺不起腰,壮不了胆。冰冷的风吹进去,紫色的血流出来…… |
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翔之 童生
Joined: 20 Jul 2009 Posts: 23
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