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空洞
杯中冲浪
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PostPosted: 2009-02-20 19:39:50    Post subject: 空洞 Reply with quote

空洞

有人
在我的胸廓
拆掉
一根


拆掉
……
总共拆掉三根
我说
我不行了
冷风飕飕的

马上我意识到问题极为严重
我去摸
黑洞洞的

我缩回自己的手
放在阳光里


几滴
紫色
犯冷
……
2009-2-21
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半溪明月
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PostPosted: 2009-02-20 20:48:40    Post subject: Reply with quote

我说
我不行了
冷风飕飕的
马上我意识到问题极为严重

写得有趣耐心寻味~
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白水
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PostPosted: 2009-02-21 02:06:36    Post subject: Reply with quote

空洞,冷风飕飕......空穴来风 Very Happy Very Happy
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骨笛
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PostPosted: 2009-02-21 05:01:49    Post subject: Reply with quote

风飕飕的让人猜度不已
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杯中冲浪
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PostPosted: 2009-02-21 23:02:48    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢朋友们 。
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孙国福
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PostPosted: 2009-02-22 03:45:02    Post subject: Reply with quote

让人浮想联翩!问好!
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在这片贫瘠的土地上我播种苦难收获苦难来磨砺我思想的剑
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安红红
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PostPosted: 2009-02-22 08:05:23    Post subject: Reply with quote

想成电影~~就是凶杀片 Smile

看着题目~或是幻境吧~

问好~冲浪~
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陈陈
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PostPosted: 2009-02-22 12:19:18    Post subject: Reply with quote

Crying or Very sad
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杨海军
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PostPosted: 2009-02-22 14:40:44    Post subject: Reply with quote

好!!!!!喜欢!!!每个人都有 一样的感 觉。
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杯中冲浪
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PostPosted: 2009-02-22 18:29:31    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢朋友们。
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PostPosted: 2009-02-23 04:33:32    Post subject: Reply with quote

经常弄些恐怖悬疑片吓人 Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2009-02-23 16:50:04    Post subject: Reply with quote

nobody wrote:
经常弄些恐怖悬疑片吓人 Very Happy

你家里又没人,害什么怕!
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PostPosted: 2009-08-13 04:42:44    Post subject: Reply with quote

喜欢朋友的诗。
我理解肋骨被抽掉的感觉。
心肺失去了安全,脊梁没有了支撑。挺不起腰,壮不了胆。冰冷的风吹进去,紫色的血流出来……
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翔之
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PostPosted: 2009-08-13 19:47:18    Post subject: Reply with quote

我不行了
冷风飕飕的
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