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两可斋夜话(节选)
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PostPosted: 2009-02-10 06:33:37    Post subject: 两可斋夜话(节选) Reply with quote

两可斋夜话(节选)

  王君明

  一
  
  何以为诗?
  或云:“兴观群怨”,四字足矣。
  然则何以兴?因何兴?兴指何处?兴托何情?皆不可不察。依次而类推之,诗,非但为语言之宗教,实乃吾侪之化身。
  故欲为诗者,必先做人。舍此,则断然无诗可观。

  二

  何为可观之诗?
  曰:真性情,弃猥琐;高境界,去浮华;出语淡而情浓,造境虚而可感;凡性情所系,盖民之悲喜;偶吟咏篇什,皆众生牵怀。
  倘如此,夜半灯下,当共粲然矣。

  三

  意象,乃诗神之微笑。
  意者,主体也;象者,客体也。非主体无以感知,非客体无以承载。故意之于象,因携诗人共优游;象之于意,乃出笔端以翱翔。
  倘二者融汇于胸臆,喷薄于灵海,则意象之神翩然而至也。

  四

  凡学诗,取径第一。
  末学酷爱诗词雅韵,然才力不逮,犹自涂鸦;格律一端,遑论遵从。故早岁吟草,其古风耶近体欤?今翻检视之,啼笑皆非也。幸得恩师两由斋主人点拨懵懂,方如梦初醒。
  然格律终属形式,譬若人之外衣。余首研摩诘之清雅,次究子美之沉郁。后读徐晋如博士宏论,认同贵族之说,与余心有戚戚焉。
  唐风宋韵,至今不绝,继承弘扬而可效法者,自有无数。然余远追摩诘子美,近学尊师大家,皆私心使然。故吟诗取径,不可不慎。

  五

  诗情画意之判断,直指诗画固有之艺术特质。
  无情感则诗词乏味,少意蕴亦画品不高。情状之情,意象之意,皆为主体,其实一也。故寡情之人,且莫学诗。

  六

  诗人,顾名思义,余以为乃吟诗之人。
  人分四类,曰:自然人,社会人,宗教人,审美人。如此四类,层次演化,或有杂糅。然诗人,无疑属精神贵族之审美人。
  自然人,嗷嗷待哺,智慧未启,痴呆傻癫,概属此列。社会人,渐知法度约束,善恶美丑,名利是非,苦乐其中。知其可为可不为,或不可为而为,或可为而不为。宗教人,有追求在焉,且为信仰而孜孜以求,苦行僧清教徒比比皆是。奈何天堂何处,地狱何在,有涯之生孰能亲历?教化人心向善,自是功不可没,然多以来世相许。唯审美人,可通天地,感日月,穿越时空隧道,抵达无限自由。
  屈灵均、陶渊明、杜子美、王静安......风雨沧桑,至今栩栩如生,吟其诗如在目前,掩其卷犹闻其声。所谓不朽,其审美人之谓哉!

(载《当代诗词》2008第四期总七十七期)
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PostPosted: 2009-02-10 07:37:51    Post subject: Reply with quote

很有见地的‘诗论’拜读!
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PostPosted: 2009-02-10 07:45:34    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢冰清先生鼓励,非诗论,实乃习诗之体会而已。
诚望先生指瑕,再拜。 Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2009-02-10 15:47:23    Post subject: Reply with quote

非浸淫其中不能道也.
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PostPosted: 2009-02-10 22:19:01    Post subject: Reply with quote

夜话论诗,真知卓见.学习了.
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PostPosted: 2009-02-11 14:06:17    Post subject: Reply with quote

如此精论,非得诗之髓,不能道也。诗作者,已明或已试者,未必能概之若此。
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PostPosted: 2009-02-16 23:49:12    Post subject: Reply with quote

揖谢各位先生鼓励,问候!
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PostPosted: 2009-02-17 06:04:52    Post subject: Reply with quote

君明诗词妙,兼且论理好!
诗乃吾侪化身,意象融汇胸臆,喷薄灵海,佳句翩然而至!
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PostPosted: 2009-02-17 07:50:55    Post subject: Reply with quote

来学习一个 Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2009-02-18 18:58:11    Post subject: Reply with quote

揖谢白云兄、白水兄,请不吝赐教。问好!
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