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白水
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Posted: 2009-01-28 12:48:03 Post subject: 枫林别

枫林别查理,听说你就要走了走在TORONTO大雪封门的日子等你踏上故土, 该是早春二月我不想问料峭的江南红梅是否已经吐蕊，久别的庭院是否会有一束淡淡的迎春花儿为你接尘十年了,十年三千六百五十个日日夜夜,足以给一位男子注满沧桑足以在一张曾经年轻的面颊刻下满腹经伦今天, 在这道别的日子我只想请你随意抽出一根一根连绵不断的思绪一头交给北美低吟浅唱的文人墨客一头飘逸江南, 任尔随风

韩少君
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Posted: 2009-01-28 13:32:59 Post subject:

人间最是离别苦儿女沾襟总为情 _________________ 靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345

qinghongh
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Posted: 2009-01-28 14:43:09 Post subject:

七绝送别查理君漂泊海外已十年，豪气曾经啸对天。揖手相别无语送，网开一面等君还。（上网北美枫）

白水
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Posted: 2009-01-28 16:34:02 Post subject:

韩少君 wrote:

人间最是离别苦
儿女沾襟总为情

谢谢少君. 若说为情, 应是友情吧, 一种在异国它乡结下的友情. 在海外, 同胞之间能给予和接受的更多是精神上的理解和支持.

一位诗友归国, 算是对他的祝福. 也算是写给其他为各自的目标(或为安逸的生活, 或为事业的开拓,或为其它......)海归的人.

移民是我们人生中的一段经历, 无论酸甜苦辣, 这段经历是抹不去的.如果可以, 的确应该用文字记录下来. 这位诗友文笔很好, 很希望将来能看到他的文章

白水
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Posted: 2009-01-28 16:40:12 Post subject:

qinghongh wrote:

七绝送别查理君

漂泊海外已十年，豪气曾经啸对天。
揖手一别无语送，网开一面等君还。

（上网北美枫）
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QINGHONGH, 不愧古韵版主, 寥寥数语, 情深意重. 学习了

hepingdao
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Posted: 2009-01-28 17:38:57 Post subject:

一路顺风! 吃好喝好玩好 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

冰清
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Posted: 2009-01-31 07:10:35 Post subject:

白水好诗。别而不伤是大境界啊！

白水
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Posted: 2009-01-31 07:27:51 Post subject:

hepingdao wrote:

一路顺风!
吃好喝好玩好
Very Happy

查理, 也许这是最好的祝愿噢. 知道你看了会偷着笑.愿你多吃点东北的酸菜饺子,拉皮,土豆丝......

白水
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Posted: 2009-01-31 07:32:37 Post subject:

冰清 wrote:

白水好诗。

别而不伤是大境界啊！

谢谢冰清.
相信我们的诗友无论到哪都有才(也有财 Razz

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秋叶
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Posted: 2009-02-01 14:31:29 Post subject:

qinghongh wrote:

七绝送别查理君
...

白水兄, 庆宏兄好深情的道别诗，即和上一首：

七绝和白水庆宏兄送别查理君

与君饯别接牛年，共对寒流雪蔽天。
凝立长亭送黄鹤，何时泼墨续诗篇？

杯中冲浪
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Posted: 2009-02-01 16:12:28 Post subject:

不知道查理能否看到，我已经感动了。 _________________ 杯中冲浪.披履而行 http://blog.sina.com.cn/shoutao006

白水
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Posted: 2009-02-01 18:05:43 Post subject:

秋叶 wrote:

qinghongh wrote:

七绝送别查理君
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白水兄, 庆宏兄好深情的道别诗，即和上一首：
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秋叶, 严重嫉妒, 啥时也送我一首? Wink

白水
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Posted: 2009-02-01 18:20:04 Post subject:

杯中冲浪 wrote:

不知道查理能否看到，我已经感动了。

问好冲浪.他会看到的. 这位查理爱读, 爱写, 文笔挺棒, 就是不发表. Very Happy

曲元奇
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Posted: 2009-02-01 18:24:57 Post subject:

句句情真意切送别诗的精品有一天会进入选集

白水
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Posted: 2009-02-01 18:51:40 Post subject:

谢谢元奇鼓励, 问好

赵福治
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Posted: 2009-02-01 20:48:10 Post subject:

情真意切的一首,有感染力.

惠远飞
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Posted: 2009-02-01 21:29:42 Post subject:

三千六百五十个日日夜夜,足以对一位男子注满沧桑足以在一张曾经年轻的面颊刻下满腹经伦好句子！情深意重啊！ _________________ 惠远飞，湖北十堰人。作品见《青春》《芳草》《热风》《短篇小说》《青春诗歌》《作家报》等数十种报刊。著有诗集《流浪的衣裳》。博客：huiyfei.blog.163.com

晴宝儿
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Posted: 2009-02-02 00:42:47 Post subject:

东北朋友回国，热烈欢迎！拥抱热土，挥别离情！ _________________ 晴宝儿

游向高原的鱼
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Posted: 2009-02-02 04:50:00 Post subject:

白水，幸好今天有网络，还能在网上相逢。为不识的查理祝福！ _________________ 人生乃是一面镜子，在其中认识自己。

半溪明月
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Posted: 2009-02-02 10:28:24 Post subject:

也来祝福下这位东北朋友，一路顺利！

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