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Posted: 2009-01-26 00:22:05 Post subject: 五绝 问缘 |
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给各位诗友问好,请指教!
五绝 问缘
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晨教说外语,
暮颂古诗词。
如若得知己,
人生一首诗。 _________________ 荣辱不惊, 闲看亭前花开花落; 去留无意, 漫随天外云卷云舒 |
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hepingdao Site Admin

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Posted: 2009-01-26 19:22:39 Post subject: |
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早晨上班去
入暮归家来
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黑白并徘徊
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lulu 秀才

Joined: 25 Jan 2009 Posts: 264 Location: dream home luluCollection |
Posted: 2009-01-27 08:52:25 Post subject: |
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hepingdao wrote: |
早晨上班去
入暮归家来
公私两兼顾
黑白并徘徊
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谢赏读和诗,问好!您的诗妙趣横生,很有意思!还望多多指教! _________________ 荣辱不惊, 闲看亭前花开花落; 去留无意, 漫随天外云卷云舒 |
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lulu 秀才

Joined: 25 Jan 2009 Posts: 264 Location: dream home luluCollection |
Posted: 2009-01-27 09:04:57 Post subject: |
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谢玉赏雅评!还望多多指教! _________________ 荣辱不惊, 闲看亭前花开花落; 去留无意, 漫随天外云卷云舒 |
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