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给各位诗友问好，请指教！
五绝 问缘
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晨教说外语，
暮颂古诗词。
如若得知己，
人生一首诗。
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| Posted: 2009-01-26 19:22:39 Post subject: |
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早晨上班去
入暮归家来
公私两兼顾
黑白并徘徊
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lulu
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| Posted: 2009-01-27 08:52:25 Post subject: |
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早晨上班去
入暮归家来
公私两兼顾
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谢赏读和诗，问好！您的诗妙趣横生，很有意思！还望多多指教！
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lulu
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| Posted: 2009-01-27 09:04:57 Post subject: |
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谢玉赏雅评！还望多多指教！
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