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PostPosted: 2009-01-26 00:22:05    Post subject: 五绝 问缘 Reply with quote

给各位诗友问好,请指教!

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晨教说外语,
暮颂古诗词。
如若得知己,
人生一首诗。
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PostPosted: 2009-01-26 19:22:39    Post subject: Reply with quote

早晨上班去
入暮归家来
公私两兼顾
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PostPosted: 2009-01-26 19:23:59    Post subject: Reply with quote

结句提升.很好.
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PostPosted: 2009-01-27 08:52:25    Post subject: Reply with quote

hepingdao wrote:
早晨上班去
入暮归家来
公私两兼顾
黑白并徘徊
Laughing

谢赏读和诗,问好!您的诗妙趣横生,很有意思!还望多多指教!
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PostPosted: 2009-01-27 09:04:57    Post subject: Reply with quote

暗香如沁 wrote:
结句提升.很好.

谢玉赏雅评!还望多多指教!
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