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五律.感

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Posted: 2009-01-26 21:54:12 Post subject: 五律.感

凉月照梅开，幽香慰我怀。邀诗枝上舞，抱剑雪中埋。恩怨随它去，欢欣入梦来。相看吟到老，莫再惹尘埃！ _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/axrq用寂寞谱写最美的舞曲~

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Posted: 2009-01-27 05:40:17 Post subject:

梅花诗人 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

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Posted: 2009-01-27 07:18:52 Post subject:

"欢欣入梦来",好!! 宽怀年年行福运, 襟阔日日笑口开! _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

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Posted: 2009-01-27 08:04:48 Post subject:

幽香梅花诗。

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Posted: 2009-01-27 17:09:45 Post subject:

暗香如沁 wrote:

凉月照梅开，幽香慰我怀。
邀诗枝上舞，抱剑雪中埋。
恩怨随它去，欢欣入梦来。
相看吟到老，莫再惹尘埃！

五律步韵奉和

衔墨纸湮开，幽幽写上怀。
如风含雪舞，似月倚山埋。
难舍闲愁去，何言自在来。
谢娘不辞老，拂袖起香埃。

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暗香如沁
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Posted: 2009-01-27 19:53:46 Post subject:

孬不好 wrote:

暗香如沁 wrote:

凉月照梅开，幽香慰我怀。
邀诗枝上舞，抱剑雪中埋。
恩怨随它去，欢欣入梦来。
相看吟到老，莫再惹尘埃！

五律步韵奉和
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好诗.学习了。
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Posted: 2009-01-28 04:37:38 Post subject:

"邀诗枝上舞,抱剑雪中埋" 无脂粉之气,有侠士之风. _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

游向高原的鱼
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Posted: 2009-01-28 05:04:33 Post subject:

底事蛾眉开，嫣然笑入怀。玉肢岂敢舞，皓首低低埋。峻峭驱时去，风流逐月来。不解为何物，皎皎远尘埃！下面是暗香如沁的原诗凉月照梅开，幽香慰我怀。邀诗枝上舞，抱剑雪中埋。恩怨随它去，欢欣入梦来。相看吟到老，莫再惹尘埃！ _________________ 人生乃是一面镜子，在其中认识自己。

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Posted: 2009-01-28 15:01:56 Post subject:

游向高原的鱼 wrote:

底事蛾眉开，嫣然笑入怀。玉肢岂敢舞，皓首低低埋。峻峭驱时去，风流逐月来。不解为何物，皎皎远尘埃！
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Posted: 2009-01-29 17:38:59 Post subject:

发表于: 星期三一月 28, 2009 5:04 am 发表主题: -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- 底事蹙眉开，嫣然笑入怀。玉肢欲劲舞，皓首又低埋。峻峭驱时去，风流逐月来。谁知何故事，皎皎远尘埃！下面是暗香如沁的原诗凉月照梅开，幽香慰我怀。邀诗枝上舞，抱剑雪中埋。恩怨随它去，欢欣入梦来。相看吟到老，莫再惹尘埃！ _________________ 人生乃是一面镜子，在其中认识自己。

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Posted: 2009-01-31 07:16:40 Post subject:

恩怨随它去，欢欣入梦来。好心态

白云闲人
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Posted: 2009-01-31 07:26:49 Post subject:

暗香的诗词造诣真了得!情感丰富,韵律悠扬! _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

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Posted: 2009-01-31 13:53:50 Post subject:

五绝感梅春风得意去, 摇落数枝梅. 远道香如故, 清途碰酒杯. Jan 31, 2009 Toronto _________________ 一路雨丝一路风

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Posted: 2009-02-01 21:21:51 Post subject:

久待望梅开，香藏入雪怀。愁情纷乱舞，子夜整齐埋。寂寞逍遥去，寒骞邂逅来。花如人镜灭，不再惹尘埃！ _________________ 蜻蜓点水非无意愁云化雨是有情

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Posted: 2009-02-01 23:50:01 Post subject:

拜望！尾联味更足。 _________________ 虚拟网络　真实生活

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