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PostPosted: 2009-01-26 21:54:12    Post subject: 五律.感 Reply with quote

凉月照梅开,幽香慰我怀。
邀诗枝上舞,抱剑雪中埋。
恩怨随它去,欢欣入梦来。
相看吟到老,莫再惹尘埃!
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PostPosted: 2009-01-27 05:40:17    Post subject: Reply with quote

梅花诗人
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PostPosted: 2009-01-27 07:18:52    Post subject: Reply with quote

"欢欣入梦来",好!!
宽怀年年行福运,
襟阔日日笑口开!
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PostPosted: 2009-01-27 08:04:48    Post subject: Reply with quote

幽香梅花诗。
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PostPosted: 2009-01-27 17:09:45    Post subject: Reply with quote

暗香如沁 wrote:
凉月照梅开,幽香慰我怀。
邀诗枝上舞,抱剑雪中埋。
恩怨随它去,欢欣入梦来。
相看吟到老,莫再惹尘埃!



五律 步韵奉和

衔墨纸湮开,幽幽写上怀。
如风含雪舞,似月倚山埋。
难舍闲愁去,何言自在来。
谢娘不辞老,拂袖起香埃。


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PostPosted: 2009-01-27 19:53:46    Post subject: Reply with quote

孬不好 wrote:
暗香如沁 wrote:
凉月照梅开,幽香慰我怀。
邀诗枝上舞,抱剑雪中埋。
恩怨随它去,欢欣入梦来。
相看吟到老,莫再惹尘埃!



五律 步韵奉和
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好诗.学习了。
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PostPosted: 2009-01-28 04:37:38    Post subject: Reply with quote

"邀诗枝上舞,抱剑雪中埋"

无脂粉之气,有侠士之风.
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PostPosted: 2009-01-28 05:04:33    Post subject: Reply with quote

底事蛾眉开,嫣然笑入怀。玉肢岂敢舞,皓首低低埋。峻峭驱时去,风流逐月来。不解为何物,皎皎远尘埃!
下面是暗香如沁的原诗

凉月照梅开,幽香慰我怀。
邀诗枝上舞,抱剑雪中埋。
恩怨随它去,欢欣入梦来。
相看吟到老,莫再惹尘埃!
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PostPosted: 2009-01-28 15:01:56    Post subject: Reply with quote

游向高原的鱼 wrote:
底事蛾眉开,嫣然笑入怀。玉肢岂敢舞,皓首低低埋。峻峭驱时去,风流逐月来。不解为何物,皎皎远尘埃!
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PostPosted: 2009-01-29 17:38:59    Post subject: Reply with quote

发表于: 星期三 一月 28, 2009 5:04 am 发表主题:

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底事蹙眉开,嫣然笑入怀。玉肢欲劲舞,皓首又低埋。峻峭驱时去,风流逐月来。谁知何故事,皎皎远尘埃!
下面是暗香如沁的原诗

凉月照梅开,幽香慰我怀。
邀诗枝上舞,抱剑雪中埋。
恩怨随它去,欢欣入梦来。
相看吟到老,莫再惹尘埃!
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PostPosted: 2009-01-31 07:16:40    Post subject: Reply with quote

恩怨随它去,欢欣入梦来。

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PostPosted: 2009-01-31 07:26:49    Post subject: Reply with quote

暗香的诗词造诣真了得!情感丰富,韵律悠扬!
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PostPosted: 2009-01-31 13:53:50    Post subject: Reply with quote

五绝 感梅

春风得意去,
摇落数枝梅.
远道香如故,
清途碰酒杯.
Jan 31, 2009 Toronto
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PostPosted: 2009-02-01 21:21:51    Post subject: Reply with quote

久待望梅开,香藏入雪怀。
愁情纷乱舞,子夜整齐埋。
寂寞逍遥去,寒骞邂逅来。
花如人镜灭,不再惹尘埃!
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PostPosted: 2009-02-01 23:50:01    Post subject: Reply with quote

拜望!尾联味更足。
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