莹雪 进士出身
Joined: 28 Sep 2006 Posts: 2520 Location: 中国-辽宁·三燕故都 莹雪Collection |
Posted: 2009-01-17 20:55:49 Post subject: 五绝—闲吟 |
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慵懒眠成病,文章怕久书。
酝思筹哲意,闲尽作新途。 |
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qinghongh 榜眼
Joined: 14 Oct 2007 Posts: 4110
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Posted: 2009-01-18 04:16:44 Post subject: |
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闲尽作新途。
欢迎莹雪MM回来! |
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黄洋界 探花

Joined: 23 Mar 2007 Posts: 3301 Location: 多伦多,加拿大 黄洋界Collection |
Posted: 2009-01-18 05:19:57 Post subject: |
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"闲尽作新途".莹雪有什么新年新打算?
过去的一年,您可是多产的,牛年会更牛吧! _________________ ++++++++++++++
喜金石书画,友竹菊梅兰 |
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白水 大学士

Joined: 02 Oct 2006 Posts: 14102 Location: TORONTO 白水Collection |
Posted: 2009-01-18 06:26:10 Post subject: |
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MM的诗歌又有提高. 祝贺 |
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他乡客 秀才
Joined: 03 Jan 2007 Posts: 487 Location: 加拿大.渥汰华 (Ottawa, Canada) 他乡客Collection |
Posted: 2009-01-18 07:26:51 Post subject: |
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“慵懒眠成病,文章怕久书。”
我是“文怕久不书”。故事开了个头,一放就是几个月。
问好莹雪。 |
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连南河 秀才
Joined: 30 Aug 2008 Posts: 342 Location: Toronto 连南河Collection |
Posted: 2009-01-18 07:28:04 Post subject: |
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问好MM
新年快乐! _________________ 一路雨丝一路风 |
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莹雪 进士出身
Joined: 28 Sep 2006 Posts: 2520 Location: 中国-辽宁·三燕故都 莹雪Collection |
Posted: 2009-01-18 23:05:32 Post subject: |
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qinghongh wrote: |
闲尽作新途。
欢迎莹雪MM回来! |
谢谢GG关注! |
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莹雪 进士出身
Joined: 28 Sep 2006 Posts: 2520 Location: 中国-辽宁·三燕故都 莹雪Collection |
Posted: 2009-01-18 23:12:02 Post subject: |
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黄洋界 wrote: |
"闲尽作新途".莹雪有什么新年新打算?
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新打算吧,就是让我自己勤劳一些,我觉得最近有点懒
黄老春节快乐,身抗体健、文采飞扬、抬头见喜、时时开心! |
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莹雪 进士出身
Joined: 28 Sep 2006 Posts: 2520 Location: 中国-辽宁·三燕故都 莹雪Collection |
Posted: 2009-01-18 23:13:42 Post subject: |
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白水 Moonlight wrote: |
MM的诗歌又有提高. 祝贺 |
JJ又夸偶了 偶一定继续努力。 |
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莹雪 进士出身
Joined: 28 Sep 2006 Posts: 2520 Location: 中国-辽宁·三燕故都 莹雪Collection |
Posted: 2009-01-18 23:15:35 Post subject: |
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他乡客 wrote: |
“慵懒眠成病,文章怕久书。”
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问好他乡客  |
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莹雪 进士出身
Joined: 28 Sep 2006 Posts: 2520 Location: 中国-辽宁·三燕故都 莹雪Collection |
Posted: 2009-01-18 23:16:51 Post subject: |
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问好
春节快乐! |
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征尘载袖 秀才

Joined: 18 Aug 2007 Posts: 527 Location: 臭豆腐作坊 征尘载袖Collection |
Posted: 2009-01-20 02:44:51 Post subject: |
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莹雪 wrote: |
慵懒眠成病,文章怕久书。
酝思筹哲意,闲尽作新途。 |
昏昏耽酒病,懒懒倦诗书。
依旧华清引,相将马识途。
:) _________________
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秋叶 秀才
Joined: 17 Feb 2007 Posts: 769
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Posted: 2009-01-20 09:38:43 Post subject: |
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莹雪 wrote: |
慵懒眠成病,文章怕久书。
酝思筹哲意,闲尽作新途。 |
大作很有哲味,拜读了。 |
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穆平 秀才
Joined: 08 Sep 2008 Posts: 572 Location: 中国 天津 穆平Collection |
Posted: 2009-01-21 23:16:18 Post subject: |
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五绝 闲吟-莹雪---步原韵奉和
慵懒眠成 病,---积久终成 病,
文章怕久 书。---教训难尽 书。
酝思筹哲 意,---未知巨头 意,
闲尽作新 途。---可曾觅新 途?
-----[冒昧敬和一首;结合当前全球经济危机,似牵强?] |
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晓松 举人

Joined: 26 Feb 2007 Posts: 1192
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Posted: 2009-01-22 17:05:07 Post subject: |
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莹雪 wrote: |
慵懒眠成病,文章怕久书。
酝思筹哲意,闲尽作新途。 |
莹雪mm的诗在向深度发掘。问候~ |
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莹雪 进士出身
Joined: 28 Sep 2006 Posts: 2520 Location: 中国-辽宁·三燕故都 莹雪Collection |
Posted: 2009-01-22 17:26:31 Post subject: |
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征尘载袖 wrote: |
莹雪 wrote: |
慵懒眠成病,文章怕久书。
酝思筹哲意,闲尽作新途。 |
昏昏耽酒病,懒懒倦诗书。
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最近太忙了,没及时回来。袖姐和诗啦!偶回和一首以表谢意!也为大家过年增加点气氛哈
贪睡眠成病,寒花别岁书。
新言如梦令,旧笔踏征途。 |
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莹雪 进士出身
Joined: 28 Sep 2006 Posts: 2520 Location: 中国-辽宁·三燕故都 莹雪Collection |
Posted: 2009-01-22 17:28:29 Post subject: |
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秋叶 wrote: |
莹雪 wrote: |
慵懒眠成病,文章怕久书。
酝思筹哲意,闲尽作新途。 |
大作很有哲味,拜读了。 |
谢谢您的点评!问好 |
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莹雪 进士出身
Joined: 28 Sep 2006 Posts: 2520 Location: 中国-辽宁·三燕故都 莹雪Collection |
Posted: 2009-01-22 17:39:05 Post subject: |
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穆平 wrote: |
五绝 闲吟-莹雪---步原韵奉和
慵懒眠成 病,---积久终成 病,
文章怕久 书。---教训难尽 书。
酝思筹哲 意,---未知巨头 意,
闲尽作新 途。---可曾觅新 途?
-----[冒昧敬和一首;结合当前全球经济危机,似牵强?] |
五绝 闲吟-回和穆平
久虑成心病,诗应大气书。
襟怀凝静志,怎畏苦前途。
-----[仓促回和一首,以述近来心绪。] |
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莹雪 进士出身
Joined: 28 Sep 2006 Posts: 2520 Location: 中国-辽宁·三燕故都 莹雪Collection |
Posted: 2009-01-22 17:48:55 Post subject: |
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晓松 wrote: |
莹雪 wrote: |
慵懒眠成病,文章怕久书。
酝思筹哲意,闲尽作新途。 |
莹雪mm的诗在向深度发掘。问候~ |
谢谢晓松gg的点评。问好~ |
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暗浮烟 童生
Joined: 12 Jan 2009 Posts: 24
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Posted: 2009-01-23 02:28:41 Post subject: |
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没看明白,这写的是什么意思? |
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