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莹雪
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PostPosted: 2009-01-17 20:55:49    Post subject: 五绝—闲吟 Reply with quote

慵懒眠成病,文章怕久书。
酝思筹哲意,闲尽作新途。
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PostPosted: 2009-01-18 04:16:44    Post subject: Reply with quote

闲尽作新途。
欢迎莹雪MM回来!
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黄洋界
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PostPosted: 2009-01-18 05:19:57    Post subject: Reply with quote

"闲尽作新途".莹雪有什么新年新打算?

过去的一年,您可是多产的,牛年会更牛吧!
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PostPosted: 2009-01-18 06:26:10    Post subject: Reply with quote

MM的诗歌又有提高. 祝贺
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他乡客
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PostPosted: 2009-01-18 07:26:51    Post subject: Reply with quote

“慵懒眠成病,文章怕久书。”
我是“文怕久不书”。故事开了个头,一放就是几个月。Razz
问好莹雪。
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PostPosted: 2009-01-18 07:28:04    Post subject: Reply with quote

问好MM
新年快乐!
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莹雪
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PostPosted: 2009-01-18 23:05:32    Post subject: Reply with quote

qinghongh wrote:
闲尽作新途。
欢迎莹雪MM回来!
谢谢GG关注!
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莹雪
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PostPosted: 2009-01-18 23:12:02    Post subject: Reply with quote

黄洋界 wrote:
"闲尽作新途".莹雪有什么新年新打算?
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新打算吧,就是让我自己勤劳一些,我觉得最近有点懒 Razz
黄老春节快乐,身抗体健、文采飞扬、抬头见喜、时时开心!
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莹雪
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PostPosted: 2009-01-18 23:13:42    Post subject: Reply with quote

白水 Moonlight wrote:
MM的诗歌又有提高. 祝贺
JJ又夸偶了 Embarassed 偶一定继续努力。
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莹雪
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PostPosted: 2009-01-18 23:15:35    Post subject: Reply with quote

他乡客 wrote:
“慵懒眠成病,文章怕久书。”
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问好他乡客 Wink
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莹雪
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PostPosted: 2009-01-18 23:16:51    Post subject: Reply with quote

连南河 wrote:
问好MM
新年快乐!
问好
春节快乐!
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PostPosted: 2009-01-20 02:44:51    Post subject: Reply with quote

莹雪 wrote:
慵懒眠成病,文章怕久书。
酝思筹哲意,闲尽作新途。



昏昏耽酒病,懒懒倦诗书。
依旧华清引,相将马识途。

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PostPosted: 2009-01-20 09:38:43    Post subject: Reply with quote

莹雪 wrote:
慵懒眠成病,文章怕久书。
酝思筹哲意,闲尽作新途。


大作很有哲味,拜读了。
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PostPosted: 2009-01-21 23:16:18    Post subject: Reply with quote

五绝 闲吟-莹雪---步原韵奉和

慵懒眠成 病,---积久终成 病,
文章怕久 书。---教训难尽 书。
酝思筹哲 意,---未知巨头 意,
闲尽作新 途。---可曾觅新 途?

-----[冒昧敬和一首;结合当前全球经济危机,似牵强?]
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PostPosted: 2009-01-22 17:05:07    Post subject: Reply with quote

莹雪 wrote:
慵懒眠成病,文章怕久书。
酝思筹哲意,闲尽作新途。


莹雪mm的诗在向深度发掘。问候~
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PostPosted: 2009-01-22 17:26:31    Post subject: Reply with quote

征尘载袖 wrote:
莹雪 wrote:
慵懒眠成病,文章怕久书。
酝思筹哲意,闲尽作新途。



昏昏耽酒病,懒懒倦诗书。
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最近太忙了,没及时回来。袖姐和诗啦!偶回和一首以表谢意!也为大家过年增加点气氛哈

贪睡眠成病,寒花别岁书。
新言如梦令,旧笔踏征途。
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莹雪
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PostPosted: 2009-01-22 17:28:29    Post subject: Reply with quote

秋叶 wrote:
莹雪 wrote:
慵懒眠成病,文章怕久书。
酝思筹哲意,闲尽作新途。


大作很有哲味,拜读了。
谢谢您的点评!问好
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莹雪
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PostPosted: 2009-01-22 17:39:05    Post subject: Reply with quote

穆平 wrote:
五绝 闲吟-莹雪---步原韵奉和

慵懒眠成 病,---积久终成 病,
文章怕久 书。---教训难尽 书。
酝思筹哲 意,---未知巨头 意,
闲尽作新 途。---可曾觅新 途?

-----[冒昧敬和一首;结合当前全球经济危机,似牵强?]

五绝 闲吟-回和穆平
久虑成心病,诗应大气书。
襟怀凝静志,怎畏苦前途。
-----[仓促回和一首,以述近来心绪。]
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莹雪
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PostPosted: 2009-01-22 17:48:55    Post subject: Reply with quote

晓松 wrote:
莹雪 wrote:
慵懒眠成病,文章怕久书。
酝思筹哲意,闲尽作新途。


莹雪mm的诗在向深度发掘。问候~
谢谢晓松gg的点评。问好~
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PostPosted: 2009-01-23 02:28:41    Post subject: Reply with quote

没看明白,这写的是什么意思?
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