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五绝—闲吟

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莹雪
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Posted: 2009-01-17 20:55:49 Post subject: 五绝—闲吟

慵懒眠成病，文章怕久书。酝思筹哲意，闲尽作新途。

qinghongh
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Posted: 2009-01-18 04:16:44 Post subject:

闲尽作新途。欢迎莹雪MM回来！

黄洋界
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Posted: 2009-01-18 05:19:57 Post subject:

"闲尽作新途".莹雪有什么新年新打算? 过去的一年,您可是多产的,牛年会更牛吧! _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

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Posted: 2009-01-18 06:26:10 Post subject:

MM的诗歌又有提高. 祝贺

他乡客
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Posted: 2009-01-18 07:26:51 Post subject:

“慵懒眠成病，文章怕久书。” 我是“文怕久不书”。故事开了个头，一放就是几个月。问好莹雪。

连南河
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Posted: 2009-01-18 07:28:04 Post subject:

问好MM 新年快乐! _________________ 一路雨丝一路风

莹雪
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Posted: 2009-01-18 23:05:32 Post subject:

qinghongh wrote:

闲尽作新途。
欢迎莹雪MM回来！

谢谢GG关注！

莹雪
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Posted: 2009-01-18 23:12:02 Post subject:

黄洋界 wrote:

"闲尽作新途".莹雪有什么新年新打算?
...

新打算吧，就是让我自己勤劳一些，我觉得最近有点懒 Razz

黄老春节快乐，身抗体健、文采飞扬、抬头见喜、时时开心！

莹雪
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Posted: 2009-01-18 23:13:42 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

MM的诗歌又有提高. 祝贺

JJ又夸偶了

偶一定继续努力。

莹雪
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Posted: 2009-01-18 23:15:35 Post subject:

他乡客 wrote:

“慵懒眠成病，文章怕久书。”
...

问好他乡客

莹雪
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Posted: 2009-01-18 23:16:51 Post subject:

连南河 wrote:

问好MM
新年快乐!

问好
春节快乐！

征尘载袖
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Posted: 2009-01-20 02:44:51 Post subject:

莹雪 wrote:

慵懒眠成病，文章怕久书。
酝思筹哲意，闲尽作新途。

昏昏耽酒病，懒懒倦诗书。
依旧华清引，相将马识途。

：）
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Posted: 2009-01-20 09:38:43 Post subject:

莹雪 wrote:

慵懒眠成病，文章怕久书。
酝思筹哲意，闲尽作新途。

大作很有哲味，拜读了。

穆平
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Posted: 2009-01-21 23:16:18 Post subject:

五绝闲吟-莹雪---步原韵奉和慵懒眠成病，---积久终成病，文章怕久书。---教训难尽书。酝思筹哲意，---未知巨头意，闲尽作新途。---可曾觅新途？ -----[冒昧敬和一首；结合当前全球经济危机，似牵强？]

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Posted: 2009-01-22 17:05:07 Post subject:

莹雪 wrote:

慵懒眠成病，文章怕久书。
酝思筹哲意，闲尽作新途。

莹雪mm的诗在向深度发掘。问候~

莹雪
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Posted: 2009-01-22 17:26:31 Post subject:

征尘载袖 wrote:

莹雪 wrote:

慵懒眠成病，文章怕久书。
酝思筹哲意，闲尽作新途。

昏昏耽酒病，懒懒倦诗书。
...

最近太忙了，没及时回来。袖姐和诗啦！偶回和一首以表谢意！也为大家过年增加点气氛哈

贪睡眠成病，寒花别岁书。
新言如梦令，旧笔踏征途。

莹雪
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Posted: 2009-01-22 17:28:29 Post subject:

秋叶 wrote:

莹雪 wrote:

慵懒眠成病，文章怕久书。
酝思筹哲意，闲尽作新途。

大作很有哲味，拜读了。

谢谢您的点评！问好

莹雪
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Posted: 2009-01-22 17:39:05 Post subject:

穆平 wrote:

五绝闲吟-莹雪---步原韵奉和

慵懒眠成病，---积久终成病，
文章怕久书。---教训难尽书。
酝思筹哲意，---未知巨头意，
闲尽作新途。---可曾觅新途？

-----[冒昧敬和一首；结合当前全球经济危机，似牵强？]

五绝闲吟-回和穆平
久虑成心病，诗应大气书。
襟怀凝静志，怎畏苦前途。
-----[仓促回和一首，以述近来心绪。]

莹雪
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Posted: 2009-01-22 17:48:55 Post subject:

晓松 wrote:

莹雪 wrote:

慵懒眠成病，文章怕久书。
酝思筹哲意，闲尽作新途。

莹雪mm的诗在向深度发掘。问候~

谢谢晓松gg的点评。问好~

暗浮烟
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Posted: 2009-01-23 02:28:41 Post subject:

没看明白，这写的是什么意思？

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